| "Sibling Bonds" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: hikari?
Reviewed By: blitzstrahl On: August 19, 2012 04:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
So what, Suzahara moves in with the other 3 pilot's and decides he wants Rei? |
Reviewed By: Ayanami Rei 2 On: December 12, 2002 03:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was a nice fic but why was Rei got TIED up with Touji. Shinji has always been in love with Rei and vice-versa though he loves Asuka as well. Anyway it has a great plot and story which I have to agree. Try to make a Shinji-Rei fic next time if possible cause with your skill and creativity it should bevery good. Arigatou and Ja Ne! |
Reviewed By: Andres Ocasio On: December 10, 2002 17:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absoluyly great, austanding and exelent is that can be said about this finale amazing work i'am usually good in predicting the ending of the story because i had read various fic but this finale totally hit me by suprise i never espected this ending, the only thing that it needs of course this is opsional is an epiloge like telling in five years what happen after the children dissapear, i mean telling what did the children study, if they had children etc of this is opcional but even without it the ending was great, best fic i have read so far, congratuletion.
ps. please update your other fic especially the evangelion fi confort and kindness i'am desperate to know how the fic will end so please update soon and merry christmas |
Reviewed By: Andres Ocasio On: December 10, 2002 17:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absoluyly great, austanding and exelent is that can be said about this finale amazing work i'am usually good in predicting the ending of the story because i had read various fic but this finale totally hit me by suprise i never espected this ending, the only thing that it needs of course this is opsional is an epiloge like telling in five years what happen after the children dissapear, i mean telling what did the children study, if they had children etc of this is opcional but even without it the ending was great, best fic i have read so far, congratuletion.
ps. please update your other fic especially the evangelion fi confort and kindness i'am desperate to know how the fic will end so please update soon and merry christmass |
Reviewed By: Larania On: November 17, 2002 14:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just realized that you really need to work on your grammar. I usually only pay attention to the plot, which IS good, but you tend to get your past and present tenses, and your punctuation, confused. You switch from present to past tense- a story is supposed to be only past tense. You don't close- or open- your quotations all the time. If you need a beta reader, I'll do it, but see if you could use your grammar check on your comp first. My email is laraniadrake@yahoo.com. |
Reviewed By: Andres Ocasio On: November 15, 2002 14:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes chapter 14 is finally here good job this fic is getting very interesting please update soon so i can know how this fic is going to end.
ps: please update your other evangelion fanfic especially your fic of confort and kindness and your fic of bonds of survival-ova i can't wait to readthe ending to this two incredible stories |
Reviewed By: andres ocasio On: October 02, 2002 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic was great please update when you can i want to know what happens next. |
