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Reviewed By: danielle dizzaterz On: November 06, 2007 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsum but post soem more u got me interested
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582(not signed in) On: August 08, 2007 23:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very cute. Please continue. Also, is the ring the shikon no tama or just a random ring, does she still have it and does he have the cute puppy ears or no? :-D Oh! Also i like the pic of Inuyasha you drew. very nice. Thanks
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Title: Nihao!
Reviewed By: Hanyou Yogonem [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! Really great story, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! So cute! this is gonna b a good story I can tell Update soon! this is a inukag fic right?
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story so far. I usually read only continuation stories, but you're stood out and it is so well done that I am definately going to continue to read. You write very well. Update soon please.
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Title: do it, do it now!
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write it, write it now! GREAT JOB! do it.....
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Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 04:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story...it shows a young girl willing to stand up for what she believes is right...a young boy who can appreciate her doing so...and I'm sorry to say, the ugliness that young people have to face sometimes. But it is a good on its own or as a prolouge to something better. Just one question...was that InuYasha or Sess who gave her the ring.
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