| "Hime-no-Youkai-no-Miko!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Hime -No-Youkai-No Miko!!!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: liliesformary [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very poorly constructed story. It reads more like a text message than a piece of fiction. Consider filling out your chapters more, developing more realistic characters and read some fiction that isn't based off of a TV show. I can only assume that you are rather young by reading this, but that doesn't excuse you from knowing how to construct a sentence or developing a chapter that exceeds 500 words (which is imperitive to a chapter story...your chapters should at least be 1500 words each). And it really helps if the characters resemble, at least in some way, the characters that they are based off of. If you really want to write a good piece of fiction (fan or original) you really need to work on your craft. Practice makes perfect.
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Reviewed By: RavenRadiance [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I Loved Your Fanfic!!! It's Totally Original!! Please Continue This Epic Fic!!! That Was Hot The Way Kagome's Eyes Glowed and That Dream...Ooo La La Sessho...Mmm blushes~So Inuyasha and Sango knew about her true form for a Month before the Final Battle?!! No Wonder Sessho was all over her for 24/7!! Holla! Keep it!
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Reviewed By: Shadesof Night114 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 03:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
#1 review ^-^ i like your idea for this fic. please write more
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