| "kissing you" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: KeriiUchiha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2010 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. This was a really good fanfic, but maybe you could check up a little more on your grammar skills? Check for run-on sentences and such. :) Otherwise, awesome fic!
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Reviewed By: BlackHaru2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 01:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was good... but you could totally expand on this. I never really like the whole POV change thing, but that's just me.
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