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| "Suffer the Children" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: leshyaedawnfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 04:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story! I like how it's shaping up! The only problem I can see was a typo in CH.1. In the scene where she rescues the kids, you kept putting 'boy' instead of 'body'. Might wanna fix that.
| Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loving this so far although there are a couple mistakes. Like in Ch.1 where the kids are attacked in the alley. You said a little boy flew out but after the whole catching scene you had said that the kid she cought was the girl...maybe I read it wrong but just a smidgen confused there ya know? Anyhoo, Keep up the good work and update soon k.
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