| "DragonBall Zenith: How Young Hearts Bleed" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Silver Armada [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 05:48 CDT
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Yay! I love this fic. What else can I say? That, and it's just so well written! And I appreciate someone who will try to use correct grammar, spelling, etc. because fics that don't are hard for me to read. Keep going with this, I like it! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 23:28 CST
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Are you still writing this? Please tell me you are! It's my favorite online story (ok tied for favorite). You HAVE to write more to this. PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 19:34 CDT
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I actually read this fic (up to chapter 8) 3 weeks ago but never got around to posting a responce. I came back to see if you had put up ay new chapters and was really disapointed to find out you hadn't. Writers block or something? In any case what i've read of the story is really good! I love how you show the charactors and describe the settings its really expresive. On another note your charactors are well developed and the plot is just getting good! I'm surprised more people havn't been reading this. It's excellent! Hope you post soon.. I'll be checking back every week or so ^_^
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 04:58 CDT
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Wow! This is a fantastic story! You captured the characters so well, even the ones of your own creation! You build the scenes so wonderfully that the writing loses its two dimensional characteristics, and transends the screen to recreate the story in the readers mind.
The plot is intriguing and none like I have ever read before, countered well by how precisely it is written. In short I loved it and can't wait to read more! |
