"Only one moment." Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Only One Moment Reviewed By: satomikainukalire On: March 14, 2009 01:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: i was just wondering what the last paragraph meant... once isn't just enough if you want the other to stay with you for, like, a long time...
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 23:16 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: nice short story... cute and really liked it... i like the ayumu/hiyono pairing... good job... great work...
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