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| "Reflections and Fulfillment" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: lspgina On: May 26, 2015 10:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read this fanfic over a dozen times, I love this and I
couldn't read it again without telling you how much I love it.
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 19:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oft! loved it! Sometimes lemons can be so untasteful, but you very succesfullyand skillifully wrote a scene that was not only readable, but also most real to Kenshin and Kaoru's situation! Kenshin was so cute with Kaoru, and I loved every minute! Congrats! ^.^
| Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 15:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this is one of the best Rurouni Kenshin fanfics i've read. The detaiLed Love scene was beautifuL. UsuaLLy i just Leave a review for every story i've read just to be poLite and offer constructive criticisms. it feLt great reading this fic of yours, it feeLs Like i was actuaLLy there! But to teLL you the truth, sometimes merging Japanese and EngLish into one sentence doesn't seem to pLease me. Like the part when you used 'Kami' instead of 'God'. BUT, that is onLy according to me... UsuaLLy when i read hentai fics and i come across a Line Like 'Kami, that feLt good' or something Like that, i aLways re-read the whoLe sentence and read it as 'God, that feLt good'. Because i think it sounds more naturaL and not to mention more erotic! BUT(again), that is onLy according to me. Anyway, um... i'd Like to thank you for putting in a gLossary! ALthough i didn't have much time to register them in my mind since it's 3.45am in here and my mind is aLready dozing off. Thank you though! This has been a wonderfuL experience reading your art, you have a naturaL gift so good Luck! i wish you aLL the best and keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: o0rae0o [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 01:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this fic! I'm a huge fan of RK, especially of KxK. Best of all, it's a lemon that's not PWP!
| Reviewed By: Silent Tears of Agony [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 03:07 EDT
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This was more thoughtful than the usual lemon, I enjoyed that. Having Kenshin think of his former wife on his wedding night, though sad, was realistic, I think, and a nice touch. Take care. :)
| Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 23:32 EDT
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Can't wait to read these upcoming stories. Keep up the good work and happy writing! XD
| Reviewed By: Denkou On: June 27, 2007 11:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Absolutely love your writing style! I haven't seen such a good writer in a long time. Your descriptions were amazing, and through your writing I found humor in it as well. I love the end where she calls Kenshin an old man and he's just like, hold on, give me a moment ^_^ Great job! I hope to see more of your writing
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm thinking you're a psyche major? the inner workings of the rurouni/battousai mind. . . his fears, his flashbacks, his reasonings... seductions. hmmm. glad you're back, i disreguarded my self imposed restriction and read the whole thing reguardless of the warning, now i'm all... anyway, steamy stuff. . . . you are quite proficient with your descriptions. ~thank you, ginny
| Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 23:27 EDT
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so sweet, captured the characters in great detail
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