| "Colour of his... eyes?" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: LOL!
Reviewed By: SnackySatan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just really like this fanfic. Your bringing a little creativity to a style that I've seen done (mostly badly) a hundred times before. You manage to set up couples with out seeming overly mushy and even get to be funny. Although you jump around a bit, like when theres a lull in conversation and Naruto and Gaara start thinking about Sasuke/Neji after going about 3 chapters without mentioning them at all. That could use some work. (and lots of Characters where OOC but since it was funny I don't care, lol pineapple). The smut was very well written (even though it didn't go all the way, drats) and I'd love to see what you do with the other...more palatable couples. P.S. Itachi should totally be on top, he's sweet but he would totally control Kyuubi, whole silk collar thing I think. (whoops was that too much? ^.^; )
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 14:23 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG this chapter was sweet and funny ( people were looking at me like i was crazy because i bust out laughing in a silent classroom yes i am crazy in the eyes of many now) but i love ur story please update soon
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic, but did you forget this fic. I especially liked the car wreck that was so funny. Please continue.
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Title: WHy?
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 05:32 CST
Comment/Review:
WHY WONT U UPDATE THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME SLOWLY BUT SURLY IM KEEPING MYSELF BUSY WITH OTHER FIC BUT THIS ONE KEEPS BITING ME IN THE ASS SAYING CHECK ME IF U DONT ILL KEEP ING BITING U IN THE ASS
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Title: update plez
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 20:31 CST
Comment/Review:
are u going to update anytime soon or have u gave up on the story i really like it if its updated hotgirl499chick@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Chii-yuki On: November 06, 2007 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are u updating any time soon or what plez update i was into it until u stopped did something happen i'll understand writers block or di u decide to drop it if anything email me and tell me what happend plez my emil is- hotgirl499chick@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 17:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHEE! I REALLY LIKED THIS CHAPTER, AND YOUR WHOLE STORY! HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enoyed this fic! ^^ It's romantic and cosy... Although, sometimes it gets just a little unrealistic; Itachi and Kyuubi has known each other for mere hours and are already acting like couple? I don't think I would write it like that, but hey - It was actually really sweet! I loved it when Itachi took Kyuubi's hand and Kyuubi looked happy about it and started fidgetting and all that! Incredibly cute! :D And even though both Itachi and Kyuubi are extremely ooc, I like it. (I'm not one to talk any way, since I'm like the frickin' queen of ooc.) I hope to see more soon. Update as soon as possible, okay? I become a junior on wednesday, so now I really need something to look forward to. ;) Good work, really. *Hugglets!*
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 16:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your story! Hope ya update real soon!
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Title: U ROCK!!!
Reviewed By: SMORES On: July 22, 2007 00:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
ur storys are amazing!!!!! i cant wait for u to write more... oh the suspense wat r they gonna say to prince sasuke!? 10 out of 10 for all
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 29, 2007 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've made a fan outta me, I totally enjoyed reading this and am looking forward to reading and reviewing up coming chapters! :D
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Reviewed By: YAOI_FREAK_DOUBLE_O_ONE On: June 24, 2007 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG THIS STORY IS FREAKING AWSOME UPDATE and I'll give you a cookie
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Reviewed By: x__corruptedPURITY [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 10:55 CDT
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Psh. Told you I'd read it, and I did laugh because I found it amusing and great. But now you owe me smut! So it best be good! xD Kidding, kidding. Keep on plugging along with yur writing of it, I wanna see the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: NiCoal On: June 19, 2007 15:29 CDT
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OH PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE I LOVE IT
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Reviewed By: LadyKurama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 21:13 CDT
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This story is so great! Please continue.
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