| "Do you see me?" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: CrystalHeart27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 17:46 CDT
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Your story doesn't need much help, just a few spelling mistakes here and there, but trust me, it's great!! I love it! I hope the pairing gets to be KagKur. But whichever it is, i hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2009 16:44 CST
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this sounds like it's going to be a good story, i hope to read more one day soon
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 18:08 CDT
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Woot! I'm liking it so far, it's very origanal! Hope you continue! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 11:00 CDT
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GOOD JOB! Keep it up and update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 10:25 CDT
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your chappies are perfectly fine the way they are dont let any one tell you other wise this was really good just one qustion is this a kruama kagome fic wait got another qustion it that cat kilala looks like i have a few more qustions does kagome know about demons if she does can she sence the demonic aura aroung the cat Kurama ANd Yusuke how will she react aroung hiei is inuyasha going to be in this story or is he dead and isent aya ayame? if so was her boy firend Kouga funny tu tu seene i might add will she reunite with shippo or is he still with her let me stop my use less babble an did sango and miroku get together arrgh shuting up now sorry for all that please up date soon knjj727
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i believe you are already quite verbose(not a bad thing), anyway if you write faster in small spirts, then i prefer short chapters so i don't have to wait so long between updates... while i admit to being selfish in that matter, if it's how you normally write then we're all happy. . . good stuff! witty, intelligent, entertaining. i like the reference to medicinal herbs (alternative medicine is the way to go!!). . . >.> in the u.s. it takes 8 years to become a doctor of veterinary medicine (D.V.M. or V.M.D.) maybe kagome took accelerated courses?. . . aside from that minute detail this story rocks so far! ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: dark_angel_of_death9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 22:25 CDT
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i look forward to reading the rest of this story its good so far :)
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its and interesting start... i'm looking forward onn reading the next chapter
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