| "Beloved grandmother" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 04:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a good story and you could leave it as a oneshot, but i hope you really do write more. also where is haruhi?
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Reviewed By: cody7799 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 18:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Cant wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 23:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
THAT WAS AWESOME STUFF! It was really good. Kyouya was the tiniest bit OC but it didn't matter because you wrote it so well. But where was Haruhi? I hope you don't make her the antagonist in this. And if that was your plan don't make her too bad please?
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 20:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was *cough* a lovely start :P
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Title: [CoinxOperatedxBoy]
Reviewed By: happybunnygod666999 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
zomg that was hot! great story! ive allways loved kyouyaxtamaki. maybe (if u havent already started) next chapter you can do it in tamaki's POV. and i would love a scene w/ hikaru and kouru... maybe a fic about them or somthing... well, great story, keep up the good work!
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