| "Another Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Erithya On: September 16, 2010 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh an awesome! I love your rwriting Seif/Hay is so awesome. Potato bit was genius! Please write more Seifer/Hayner they are so good together!! So cute!!
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Title: So... funny...
Reviewed By: FinalFallenFantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XDXDXDXDXD this made me laugh so much... Especially Hayner telling Seifer to order a potato... *shakes with mirth* I really love this storyverse; it's so funny! XD even Rai likes Seifer?? O_O Whoa...
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Reviewed By: AmytheYu On: December 25, 2008 17:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I can't believe I totally missed this...for almost 2 years. Sequel yay!!! I'm so happy right now I could cry. ='D Best. Smut. EVER! X3
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Title: Silly Me
Reviewed By: Aiko Sleep On: April 15, 2008 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry! I didn't know you made a continuation... Loved how Rai and Fuu are in the story! So funny!!! Thanks for having Hayner tell his past. I found it really cute!
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Reviewed By: nomalaz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rarely see Seifer/Hayner fics. Usually when they're paired it's just mentioned in passing not actually the main focus, which I'm glad in this fic they are. Kudos on Seifer showing a little bit of a caring side to Hayner about his home-life situation. (And leave it to Fuu and Rai to ruin the moment.)
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: deejayXbrian [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I read the first fic! You know, I never see this paring but I like it alot! I encourage you to write more Seifer X Hayner yummy goodness.
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Reviewed By: plusher [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. I enjoyed it. However, you should know that Fuu is a girl.nOther than that, great job.
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Reviewed By: rawr its me On: July 10, 2007 00:19 CDT
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Wow. I'm impressed. You don't usually see that kind of pairing. If the fic is yaoi, it's usually Roxas/Axel or Sora/Riku. Unusual and great, with a light dusting of comedy. I like it. One problem though, Fuu is a girl. But overall, I liked it a lot. XD
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Title: bets can suck..litterly
Reviewed By: lala citty On: June 24, 2007 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it its soo cute..are u planning to make this a continuation? u should......update soon
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Title: Lovely, as usual.
Reviewed By: AngelofMint On: June 24, 2007 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh! that was lovely! I am oh so glad that I woke up early to read that :D (well..finished things quick to have extra time) I was eating an apple as I read this and...I kinda had to stop reading at the...interesting parts :) "when you asked me to come spend a few days with you - this wasn't what you seemed to have in mind."
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