Reviewed By: Genie_666 On: June 19, 2007 00:12 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I enjoyed this fic so much. I'm so glad you wrote it (although having paragraphs could help organize your text..just a suggestion...) I was so sad when i saw tat i was on the last chapter. This fic was original just with the way it was written...it was really original-- like a book you can't put down until you read the final word of the last page. You have a talent in writing and i hope you exploit it!
Reviewed By:cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 21:54 CDT Comment/Review: I really wanted to read the story but trying to read it in the format it's in now gave me a serious headache. Please try and fix so that I can read your story, it looks like it's intresting.
