| "The Bane of My Existence" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Josilin Stafford On: January 13, 2010 08:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and hope that someday you will finish it.
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Reviewed By: Hanyou_swimmer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 04:04 CST
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OMG! I read this story in its original version and I loved it. And you have totally found a way to make it better. I'll admit, I was kinda sad to see that you took the original Kagome's first orgasm scene out, but I love this version a lot more. The only advice I can give you would be to clear up the timeline. I'm kinda confused, is Kagome a junior in high or college? Other than that, your writing is amazing and it has definitely grown since you first posted this story on aff.
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Reviewed By: mara a.k.a mrs. Uchiha On: June 25, 2007 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...........YOU HAD ME IN TEARS ON THE LAST CHAPTER........I REALLY SAT HERE AND CRIED BECAUSE IZZY DIED.........LOVED THE LEMON PART TO IT WAS SIZZLING IF I DO SAY SO MYSELF...HURRY UP AND UPDATE SOON....ALSO GOT A QUESTION HOW OLD IS MIROKU, INUYASHA, KAGOME, AND SANGO.....JA NE
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that last chapter almost made me cry at the thought of Izayoi dieing. Poor fluffly and Inuyasha. but hey, at least Kagome got to feel like someone really loved her in the end. Please up date soon I love it!!!
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Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, that made me cry, what with the whole dying scene, but i have a ?, did they have sex in the hospital or what because i looked for a scene change and didn't find one so...yea, but anyway, beautiful story.(Wipes tear away) and keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: veed On: June 20, 2007 21:24 CDT
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wonderful. is it finished? or are there more to this? if so.. i'm thinkin` there's gona be some drama. ;] good job
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Title: BRAVO!!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely brilliant! I am so glad I just found this story because it is awesome and I LOVE it SOOO much!! Great job and I look forward to the next chapter!! (There is more right...isn't there? hope so!) =)
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Reviewed By: kitsunegirl48 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 00:09 CDT
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God - poor Inuyasha, Sesshou, and espedcially Tai - must be hard ~ on a lighter note, go kagome supporten your man AND gettin laid!! Update Soon, k?
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 23:57 CDT
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I'm not sure where to begin. I read your other story, "Maybe Next Time", first. I'm not sure what it was but something is missing in it. I can't for the life of me see what it is but I am happy to say that this story shows no such problems. This story shows so much well thought out plot and detail. I'm still dizzy from your successful depiction of the characters. I can honestly imagine everything you wrote without any doubts that it wasn't something the orginals might do. I do believe I love this story. Usually I can't shut up about the good/bad things about a story but for some reason I am unable to ramble on right now. I'm just blown away by your work. Your writing style is lovely. I never read the unrevised version but whatever you did to it continue to do so! I can't wait to see what happens next. For a while I thought you might have wrote yourself in a corner but I was very happy to see I was wrong. I won't talk about the dreaded mechanic errors that can be found in any story. I trust that you will correct them later. I will say that sadly the formating is still a problem. It's readable now but you will have to tweak it, soon. That 8-10 font hurt my eyes. And I have to ask...is this story posted on FF.Net? Because the font style suggest that it is.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story and WOW it is amazing. You have quite the talent! I was so mesmerized by your story I whined to myself when I got to the end of your lastest chapter and realized there were no more chapters to read. Please oh please update soon!
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Title: I luv u
Reviewed By: Scarlet Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg one of the best stories ive read in a long time. holy hell. I luv it keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: LostInSiberia_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 13:07 CDT
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Gods, this was so sad!! But you made up for it at the end of the last chapter. ;) Keep going, can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 09:54 CDT
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well written.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 04:01 CDT
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i really like your story... hope you update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Amaryllis Embers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Its so origonal and just wow lol Though it would be nice to space your story a bit. I sometimes end up losing my place in the fic cause the lines are right after the other, ya kno? BTW I hope you right more to this fic cause its a really great and unique one and I'd like to read more soon. ^_^
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