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| "Valentine's Day" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Laural Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was good enough that I managed to get a friend of mine to read it. Why is this impressive? Slash squicks her badly. I found Sage's initial reaction to the guys' move perfect, but after he cooled down, it seemed he either should have gone after Ryo or listened to reason. As for the guys themselves, it seems they would have been a little less easy about leaving Ryo with the Warlords when their leader was in that condition, but overall, not bad at all.
| Reviewed By: Crimson Flames On: October 15, 2001 20:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, Crimson flames here I just wanted to say hats off. the Story was amazing! I was holding my breath the whole time! I love your style of writing! If you ever think about writeing wit another please let me know I'm looking for someone to write a fic with , it would be a ronin warrior fic my e-mail is
SageToyamarein@aol.com and my IM adress is Sagetoyamarein Brovo again,good job.
Please read my fic and tell me what you think it's under the anime of Ronin warriors and it's titled Battles and my name is Crimson Flames | Reviewed By: Cutter On: November 17, 2001 22:36 CST
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Wow. That was amazing. I love your writing style, you can make the reader really get into the stories. I loved it. Bravo, Firestar, Bravo.
If all your fics come out like that, then don't you dare stop writing, k? See ya.
Once again, that was awesome. |
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