| "The Dreaded... High School" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Response
Reviewed By: Mr Uzumaki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 10:32 CDT
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I never looked at it that way, but in this case i am talking about the peeping tom kind of voyeur, as in stare into the window while breathing heavy kind of voyeur.
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Reviewed By: purplegoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it's not bad at all, although in the last chapter it took great effort for me not to do something self-destructive (I don't like Kakashi being in couples, but what can i do) you should be nicer to voyeurs, what do you call the people reading this
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeals* GAARA!!!!!!! my fav character besides Naruto.. man you should see my desktops.. the one i have right now is Gaara and he is so cute! but i have hott gaara ones too, it's just this one's a kid gaara! yays for me!! I also have ones of the other characters (Naruto!!) and other anime! (like bleach and s-cry-ed and etc.) ANYways>> great chap and i'm really looking forward to the next one! ya know i haven't looked at my bio for some time.. think i'll have a look.. i don't stay very updated here b/c i like ff.net better so whatever's on my one here may not be right... it's been a while though.. a year and something.. ok, that's a long time... ~TS~ bye!
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Reviewed By: Mistress_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 06:56 CDT
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ok this is know one of my favorite stories, your the second fastes author i read.hope you keep going
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UGH! If i was in the story i would kill sakura.. seriously I hate her! Ino is spoiled.. yay kakashi! ~TS~ by the way it's 'Sheay' not 'Shay' sorry just wanted to point that out..
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Reviewed By: Mistress_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 02:56 CDT
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alright great effort on This story
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww.. they finally got somewhere and it ended! Yay friday!!! ~TS~ ja
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Title: Chapter Coming Soon
Reviewed By: Mr Uzumaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 13:29 CDT
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I just want to say that while the first 3 chapters have more or less been a breaze in writing this lemon is a pain in my ass, this being my first time writing a fic and all, I dont want you to die Teioke so the next chapter should be out by friday at the latest. I want to say ahead of time there will be a week or so i wont be able to write, that week being around July 17-27 or so, i am so sorry, I hope to have the sixth chapter at least by then but if i dont i am incredibly sorry, and moon leaf please dont take away the cookie, ANYTHING BUT THAT
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Reviewed By: Mistress_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 04:01 CDT
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this story seems alright so far keep going, i would like next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, NO!!! you left a cliffy!! i will die if you don't write the lemon fast! plz update soon!! damn- wish i could write a lemon/lime.. i mean i can but i don't do well.. ~TS~ ja ne..
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Title: YAY Cookies
Reviewed By: Mr Uzumaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 11:13 CDT
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Why thanks, no one has given me a cookie for writing smut before, oh wait this the first time i have written it, anyway i updated chapter 2, i spoof several preppy stores and a few hotter gothic stores. Read for yourselve to find out more. Btw i wanted to make Sasuke seme but you changed my mind.
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Reviewed By: DancingMoonLeaf On: June 21, 2007 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooohhhhhh Sasuke you naughty little thing you. Anway wrtie more and make Sasuke uke (sasUKE) he is a damn cute little uke. Anway you rock and have to write more *holds author at gun point* and if you do you get a cookie (random person *cough bipolar cough)
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Title: In Response
Reviewed By: Mr Uzumaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 10:15 CDT
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I appreciate your honesty, this is the type of critizism i need, constructive. I really wish to thank you, to the other reviewer i wish to thank you for your warm review, i glad you liked my first fic, the third and maybe the forth chap should be out be next week
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, awesome.. do you have this on Fanfiction.net too? if not i think it would do great over there.. as i would review it over there too! ff.net is so much better.. well that's just my opinion! ~TS~ later...
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Title: i little assistance
Reviewed By: confusednarutofan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 18:06 CDT
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I'm liking this story so far but there are some mistakes that needs to be pointed out. lucky for you I'm here to help. In some areas of your story you either have to much puntuation or not enough. Also sometimes its hard to tell who is speaking. But those problems can be fixed by just reading over your chapters a few times before posting them. Oh and with sasuke's pov you did a lot of skipping and didn't let them build up to the setting. Good story anyway, you'll get the hang of it. well keep writing, see ya.
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