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| "Stripped" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: kinukitty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
This made me smile the whole time. Among my favorite lines: "How horny was I? So horny that part of me found the thought of Aya punishing me kind of hot. I mean, Aya! If any guy could make punishment annoying, interminable, and not hot, he had to be the guy." It really captures the tone. And from Aya: "I really doubt that you ask your other potential lays for references." Just killed me. Also: "Stop finding me interesting! I'm not interesting." Good try, my fascinating friend. I also liked Yoji's quick weapons check before going in for the kiss. Other things too, but these are the ones I remember, and MM doesn't really allow for going back in. This story is sweet and enjoyable, and I'm glad you posted it.
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Any new story from you is a special treat (loved the Trinity Blood story as well), but this one is just perfect. Terrific humor to start and end as well as a theme throughout, but the slow revealing of additional depths, triggering Yohji's detective instincts and desires, all in a believable and subtle way made this story especially wonderful. This is a story to treasure.
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