Title: Request
Reviewed By: LaLa13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I was so focused on Shannon and Pacifica I didn't really have time to mourn for Raquelle, so don't apologize for killing her off. Your style of writing is quite good. I've read many lemons, and for this being your first, I would say you have potential in this area. I was wondering if you could do a lemon with Pacifica and Fulle? I really loved Fulle's character... I cry everytime I watch the series... Write on! Lala
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