| "I'm not touching you!" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Reviewed By: TuxedoUranus89 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, this was very cute, and very sexy! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 15:31 CST
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Too funny! You have a real gift for a turn of phrase. Who wouldn't want a "ride on the wild hanyou express?" And I just cracked up thinking about that $3 hooker on a $3,000 night. Geez! They must have been lined up, otherwise she never could have fit that many in if she had to keep going back to the corner to yell, "Hey, baby!" at all the cars. LOL!! Love the whole "I'm not touching you" concept. Great one!
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so fraken adorable!!
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Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 10:35 CDT
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What a fun read =) I like your style. A three dollar hooker on a three thousand dollar night? *wince* Great work. I'll be looking for more from you.
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 03:24 CDT
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hahahaha that was good. I like that, im not touching you thing.. I do that to my roommate and it annoys the crap out of him. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: XxSangoxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 02:45 CDT
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Niccce lol
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh now this was interesting, lol. I used to hear, "He's touching me", from one of my kids to another all the time, till I through over at em that 'I' was gonna touch em, lmao. Well, that ended that... what a little thing like a cold glass of water can do sometimes, lol. But this was great. Have anything more? ;)
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant, as always. It didn't have much of a plot, like you said, but who needs one of those things, anyway? It's perfect just the way it is! Especially loving the Come Hitherism. And those analogies! As sore as a three dollar hooker on a three thousand dollar night????? *ouch* Your short little paragraph of an epilogue was cute too. Hell, I even liked the "boarder" you drew between your story and author's note!
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Reviewed By: theknightcallsmyname [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your style of writing and your sense of humor! ::Going now to devour the rest of your stories::
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Title: nokomarie the snake
Reviewed By: Nokomarie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 12:20 CDT
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Who needs maturity when there's an interested hanyou about?
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 07:37 CDT
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I loved it! Lots of fun!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 07:02 CDT
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** blushes ** sorry about the double posting.. MM was acting up..
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 07:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This may have been a "slacker" vignette but it was bloomin' Brillant!! I loves it!! The new term for blue balls!! I LOVES it!! and the way it went from 'not touching' to 'touching you' was beautiful!! I love that Kagome misinterpret the Sulky Pout!! Glomps!!!! I really really really Love this!! And you still kept the love making very very sexy! The humour was prefect! and I am hoping for a sequel maybe? The Hanyou Express!! I so got the Polar Express in my head with this one and that train turned into one Smexy Hanyou. Please keep up the most Excellent work!!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 06:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This may have been a "slacker" vignette but it was bloomin' Brillant!! I loves it!! The new term for blue balls!! I LOVES it!! and the way it went from 'not touching' to 'touching you' was beautiful!! I love that Kagome misinterpret the Sulky Pout!! Glomps!!!! I really really really Love this!! And you still kept the love making very very sexy! The humour was prefect! and I am hoping for a sequel maybe? The Hanyou Express!! I so got the Polar Express in my head with this one and that train turned into one Smexy Hanyou. Please keep up the most Excellent work!!
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny and cute! I loved it! buuutttt I will prob never think of the i'm not touching you game the same way. ^^ GREAT JOB!!!!
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Reviewed By: Arii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 03:49 CDT
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Damn...I wanna play that game.
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 00:31 CDT
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It sorta had a plot. I loved it!!!! I'm not touching you! That was great! Nothin' like a good Hentai story to end the night with. Amazing as usual!!! Oh course, keep of the great works!! More one-shots please!!!
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