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Title: OMG Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 02:30 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Now the baby......This is like a soap opera......lol....but that was a interesting way to fix things....well half way fix things........are you skeeming something....Like they will get back to gether someware in that hard time......I realy want to see how you pull this off.....Ok this is a short review but up date soon....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 00:08 CDT Comment/Review: love the new chapter... another twist to the story... hope you update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: InuYashacrazy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 20:55 CDT Comment/Review: i luv this story u r a great inuyasha writer ~_~
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 16:46 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ya know I think I would feel the same way as Kagome if I were in her position....I mean the guy just leaves you...aaaaaaand now he thinks he can make it better.....my gosh there is no excuse if Koga tried to stop him so much....but I feel bad for him to because Kagome said she was going to use him then lose him...I mean his heart would break and he would more than likely commit suiside and she would feel resposible which she would but things shouldn't be set right after its to late....its not to late for Yash to fix things and hes tring he realy is I just wish he would have lissened to Koga and stayed with her it was just so wrong of him to leave. What could he say to fix a broken heart....what can he do to make her love him again....Those who hate once had to love.....Is it better to love and lost then to have never loved at all??.....You sure got them in a pickle I mean I'm sure you have a plan for them. but if I had to write this story I would be at a loss of how to fix it with out it just happening....Something big would have to happen to fix it now...sigh...ok try to up date realy soon.....Nyuka.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 13:20 CDT Comment/Review: so the story did have some interesting twists... well i just hope that the both of them will work things out and be happy again... hope you update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 17:22 CDT Comment/Review: Ok I wrote my last review and like five minutes later you posted the next chapter weird hu.....But the same thing goes....Make it all better....what can he do to fix it aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa he abandond her what can he do.....what is she suppose to think......the hole think just seems unfair.....sigh......Ok Nyuka signing out ....P.s. update realy soon....like you just did XD *glint*
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 16:57 CDT Comment/Review: That friken Jurk what the heck does he think he is doing my gosh this is retarded......Ok got to calm down *huph* *huph*.....Ok Yash is leaveing the love of his life for no reason what is he doing Kagome loves him and hes only candeming her....he keeps saying that things are falling apart....well things wouldn't fall apart if he wasn't being an idiot...I mean what does he think he is going to prove by leaving.......grrrrrrrrrrrrrr*......Ok I'm getting a little worked up....Your that author fixs this.....sigh....I'm sorry I know its things like this that make the story but I cant help my self this isn't right....fix it, fix it, fix it, fix it, fix it, fix it.......Ok just in case you didn't get the message...FIX IT!....okay upday soon..*smiles sweetly*...NYUKA
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Reviewed By: Resilience [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 12:01 CDT Comment/Review: ooooooooh...thanks for the explanation. the only reason i asked was because i know that some medications used to treat the radiation some times make the hair fall out too......idk. i'll have to ask my ma (she's a doc.)Great chapter btw! i can't wait to find out what happens with Mimi and Yuki. funny how you made things turn out like that....yuki and the kiss and mimi and the open blouse. yeah. anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! come soon!
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Reviewed By: Resilience [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 13:04 CDT Comment/Review: i have officially warmed up to this new story!! hehe, just ignore all the rude comments i made in my last review. can't wait till the next chapter! i wonder what happens with Kagome's cancer....does she REALLY have to have her hair cut off....don't yell at me, im stupid.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 01:27 CDT Comment/Review: interesting story with a twist though... i like it... hope this has a happy ending... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: No way Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 23:55 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is getting good.....and I realy don't think she has the stumic flew...(hint hint...to my thoughts at least).......Now this is going to get interesting we got all these people out to seperate our heros......Dang can't yka gust throw them in a room and catch them on fire dang it....but I guest there would be no story....sigh......Ok so basicly get the next chapter up as fast as you can so I can read more this is getting way go good.....XD (YaY!)
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Reviewed By: anonymous obsession On: June 22, 2007 21:45 CDT Comment/Review: SHE`S PREGNANNNT ! YAY. ahahaha !
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Reviewed By: LostInSiberia_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 17:00 CDT Comment/Review: Aww, this was soo sweet! =] Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Resilience [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 00:55 CDT Comment/Review: hm. i don't know. i really do like this story (i mean Forever in Love and Past Mind, Present body), but i think this chapter might've been a small let down for me. i also tink that PMPS (lol, that sounds like 'pimps') could've gone further. i wouldn't of minded the trip to Hawaii being played out. But its cool. i hope this story is longer than the last one (chapters wise). i look forward to the next chapter! And this was good chapter. actaully. forget what i said. pay no attention to the rambling of an old lady.
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Reviewed By: fishesrcool69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 13:18 CDT Comment/Review: Ohh! I can't wait to read this! grrr, upload a chapter!!!!!!!!! I really liked the other story and...yeah :]
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