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Reviewed By: Resilience [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:50 CDT
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hesus, what a wild story. sorry i could't review earlier i was at Camp counseling little kids....hehe. it was a real birth control (if you don't get that, here: spend a week with 85 3rd-5th grade boys and girls makes you really to not want kids). but i snuck out at night when the kids fell asleep teh whole week with all the other counselors and never got caught! fun! OH CRAP, im spamming. sorry. umm, yeah i totally agree with Nyuka. like evrryword of what she said agreed with me. but a few things were weird. Why would Kagome act like that?! i sure as heck wouldnt act like that. she made me angry. but then again Yash made me angry too. What was so horrible? why did he think everyhitng was falling apart and he would never make her happy again?! what a freak. great story, love it, keep writing other fics!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 18:39 CDT
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Awww! I was sorta expecting Kit to be pregnant, but ya know this was still great! (BTW, that AWWW! means KAWAIIIIIIII!!!) Ahem. Maybe a sequel to the sequel? Ya know, with all the kids lives and stuff. But it's your time, your ideas, and your life. Do want you want. Best of Luck!
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Title: NICE!
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 16:23 CDT
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Good job on finishing it off...I don't think that It could have ended better....*sniff* you pulled it off...the pain is gone...I don't feel there pain any more....awwwww..*sigh of relief*.....And good job with the epilogue.....I it was just so cozy...aaaaaaahhhhh...Nyuka.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 15:54 CDT
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wonderful story... good ending... great job!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 10:24 CDT
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Yeah! i'm all huggles and stuff! You took my suggestion! or were you planning that all along? ... anyhow, i love it i love it i love it!!! 5 *'s! I can't wait for the epilouge, it's gonna be great!
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Reviewed By: fishesrcool69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 07:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! I'm crying! This is very depressing, especially since they named their son after Inuyasha ... I completely forgot that the only reason Yash was living was 'cause of Inuyasha until that... You should make more stories with Yash and Kagz. Even if it's like in the past since you did like time skips and stuff. I really got into their relationship. It's so tragic and sweet and...amazing! I can't wait for the epilogue. I love your stories. You are an amazing writer. Make more stories or I will dieeeee!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 23:11 CDT
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great story... that was a really nice chapter ending... can't wait for the epilogue... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 20:39 CDT
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that was sweet having the baby be named after inuyasha
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 10:08 CDT
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Bad Kit and Food Coloring though!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 10:07 CDT
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I think that.... you could put one more chapter with the wedding and end that chapter with Kagome going into labor, and then have the epilouge with everything else. And maybe you could name one of the babies (there has to be more than one!) Inuyasha, after the past one, because even though Kagome doesn't truly love him anymore and he's dead, he gave his heart and life for Yash's. And maybe one names Shippo? I don't know. Please! Update!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 23:16 CDT
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really nice chapter update... i think you should put in a chapter with the wedding and the baby being born... then after that the epilogue... that should be great... just my suggestion... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: bernhart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to read more. I would like that very much, even an epilogue. Though I would enjoy the wedding and the new baby. Go for it, just don't stress yourself out. I enjoyed it so far.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 22:39 CDT
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Ya know I have to addmit I agree with kagomesdouble07 This is a good place to end it...Normally I hate when things end..but this story was realy getting to me...for realy I was getting all depressed....So you should put something Like ten years later in the epilogue...This was a good story to read and I look forward to reading more on you new story....hopefully I don't get depressed.....sigh......Nyuka
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 22:20 CDT
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i think you can end it now. you just should put the birth and wedding in the epilogue
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooo! Not Renku! this BETTER be good news, i couldn't STAND it if anything happened to him! If kagome's light-headed... - does this mean she's pregnant again? You can't stop this story!!!! It's soooooo good! Please Update!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Now the baby......This is like a soap opera......lol....but that was a interesting way to fix things....well half way fix things........are you skeeming something....Like they will get back to gether someware in that hard time......I realy want to see how you pull this off.....Ok this is a short review but up date soon....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 00:08 CDT
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love the new chapter... another twist to the story... hope you update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: InuYashacrazy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 20:55 CDT
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i luv this story u r a great inuyasha writer ~_~
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know I think I would feel the same way as Kagome if I were in her position....I mean the guy just leaves you...aaaaaaand now he thinks he can make it better.....my gosh there is no excuse if Koga tried to stop him so much....but I feel bad for him to because Kagome said she was going to use him then lose him...I mean his heart would break and he would more than likely commit suiside and she would feel resposible which she would but things shouldn't be set right after its to late....its not to late for Yash to fix things and hes tring he realy is I just wish he would have lissened to Koga and stayed with her it was just so wrong of him to leave. What could he say to fix a broken heart....what can he do to make her love him again....Those who hate once had to love.....Is it better to love and lost then to have never loved at all??.....You sure got them in a pickle I mean I'm sure you have a plan for them. but if I had to write this story I would be at a loss of how to fix it with out it just happening....Something big would have to happen to fix it now...sigh...ok try to up date realy soon.....Nyuka.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 13:20 CDT
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so the story did have some interesting twists... well i just hope that the both of them will work things out and be happy again... hope you update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 17:22 CDT
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Ok I wrote my last review and like five minutes later you posted the next chapter weird hu.....But the same thing goes....Make it all better....what can he do to fix it aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa he abandond her what can he do.....what is she suppose to think......the hole think just seems unfair.....sigh......Ok Nyuka signing out ....P.s. update realy soon....like you just did XD *glint*
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