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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 16:57 CDT
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That friken Jurk what the heck does he think he is doing my gosh this is retarded......Ok got to calm down *huph* *huph*.....Ok Yash is leaveing the love of his life for no reason what is he doing Kagome loves him and hes only candeming her....he keeps saying that things are falling apart....well things wouldn't fall apart if he wasn't being an idiot...I mean what does he think he is going to prove by leaving.......grrrrrrrrrrrrrr*......Ok I'm getting a little worked up....Your that author fixs this.....sigh....I'm sorry I know its things like this that make the story but I cant help my self this isn't right....fix it, fix it, fix it, fix it, fix it, fix it.......Ok just in case you didn't get the message...FIX IT!....okay upday soon..*smiles sweetly*...NYUKA
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Reviewed By: Resilience [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 12:01 CDT
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ooooooooh...thanks for the explanation. the only reason i asked was because i know that some medications used to treat the radiation some times make the hair fall out too......idk. i'll have to ask my ma (she's a doc.)Great chapter btw! i can't wait to find out what happens with Mimi and Yuki. funny how you made things turn out like that....yuki and the kiss and mimi and the open blouse. yeah. anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! come soon!
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Reviewed By: Resilience [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 13:04 CDT
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i have officially warmed up to this new story!! hehe, just ignore all the rude comments i made in my last review. can't wait till the next chapter! i wonder what happens with Kagome's cancer....does she REALLY have to have her hair cut off....don't yell at me, im stupid.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 01:27 CDT
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interesting story with a twist though... i like it... hope this has a happy ending... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: No way
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting good.....and I realy don't think she has the stumic flew...(hint hint...to my thoughts at least).......Now this is going to get interesting we got all these people out to seperate our heros......Dang can't yka gust throw them in a room and catch them on fire dang it....but I guest there would be no story....sigh......Ok so basicly get the next chapter up as fast as you can so I can read more this is getting way go good.....XD (YaY!)
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Reviewed By: anonymous obsession On: June 22, 2007 21:45 CDT
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SHE`S PREGNANNNT ! YAY. ahahaha !
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Reviewed By: LostInSiberia_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 17:00 CDT
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Aww, this was soo sweet! =] Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Resilience [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 00:55 CDT
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hm. i don't know. i really do like this story (i mean Forever in Love and Past Mind, Present body), but i think this chapter might've been a small let down for me. i also tink that PMPS (lol, that sounds like 'pimps') could've gone further. i wouldn't of minded the trip to Hawaii being played out. But its cool. i hope this story is longer than the last one (chapters wise). i look forward to the next chapter! And this was good chapter. actaully. forget what i said. pay no attention to the rambling of an old lady.
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Reviewed By: fishesrcool69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 13:18 CDT
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Ohh! I can't wait to read this! grrr, upload a chapter!!!!!!!!! I really liked the other story and...yeah :]
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