| "The Gate Misadventures" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: toacertainkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2010 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loves it! An awesome read, entertaining and is funny as heck! Please write more!
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Title: [dieing of laughter]
Reviewed By: Ryuusei Rosuto [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA! TAKE THAT FULLMETAL! man, i wish i was there to see his face when the sorting hat put him in Huffelpuff! your story is, how should i put it? BLOODY BRILIANT! the fact you baised it when James and Snape were in school really suprised me, but it really makes it intresting. I bet Sirious and James get Ed to join them, that would be hysterical! anyways, i loved it!
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 03:31 CDT
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It's a bit sad that you don't have more reviews. D: I really like this story; the plot and dialogue are both very endearing, and I love how you placed Edward in Hufflepuff! (Yaaaay Huffle!) There are quite a few spelling errors in the first couple chapters, but it gets much better after that. :3 Keep writing and update soon, 'mkay? Good luck with any and all writer's block!
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Reviewed By: You are evil On: July 17, 2007 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorting Al into Slytherin and Ed into Hufflepuf was unexpectedly funny twist. Wonder what kind of mischief they are going to be up to from now on.
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Reviewed By: phnixfire72 On: July 17, 2007 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really funny! plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: Saanrio [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 16:25 CDT
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Well, I have to admit, I was wary at first of a crossover with these two worlds, but this is interesting! I love the way you have made the Gate a character, I'd like to see more of that. You might want to be careful to avoid making it nothing more than the 'deus ex machina' device. Good start, I'm looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 19:19 CDT
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Yay! I love Snape! :3 I really hope that you stay sympathetic to his side; I always thought James was a horrible git for being mean to my favorite potions master. D:
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Title: Neat
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting twist to the story. Snape is an interesting character.
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Reviewed By: Phe (Flame Phoenix, NLI) On: June 29, 2007 13:05 CDT
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Hee. x3 I giggled at the bit where Ed wonders about the "pig blemish place". I haven't seen someone take the name Hogwarts seriously yet, so it took me a moment to figure out. And now, they're off! I'm excited to see how they'll react to the school. :3 Good luck with any and all writer's block!
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 14:15 CDT
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I love the story so far. Keep it up!
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 10:46 CDT
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I'v never thought of this concept- all the cross overs like this have Edward meeting Harry Potter right off the bat! Please update, this looks great. What will Eddo do when Nicholas dies....? ;.;
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Title: Promising
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 01:55 CDT
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I usually don't like Cross fics but yours is interesting. By the way when are they on the HP universe?
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