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| "Call My Name" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: SHEESH!
Reviewed By: RefinedMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 02:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
MAN! I am not contributing any stories to MM.net... I had totally different reviews for Fanfiction.net and I was so damn when I saw all the reviews here. >< Removing the story soon... In Fanfiction.net, I am RetardedMe. DAMN!
| Reviewed By: Spikey_Kun On: June 23, 2007 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erm... really now... a speeding car seems like such a mundane thing in a world that's psuedo pre-Meiji era Japan, not to mention extremely cliche. At the very least change the basic premise for Naruto taking a hit for Sasuke, and Sasuke feeling guilty. Also, my main beef with Yaoi is that the characters are usually EXTREMELY out of character. Nothing of their original personalities is left intact, and all you're left with is a story where you could easily replace names with any Tom, Dick, and Jane and it would make absolutely no difference. I'd say try to incorporate something of the character's personalities into your story, rather than having everything read out like a bad Romance novel.
| Title: To Anonamous
Reviewed By: RefinedMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 08:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Erm...I had warned you all already, don't like YAOI, please press backspace, so you can't complain. And also, SASUNARU is nice too. SASUSAKU is damn stupid and I hate that pinky! She always whines about SASUKE so I hate her! And she also hits Naruto! But sometime Sakura isn't that bad. SO PLS DON'T ANYHOW FLAME PEOPLE WHEN THAT DAMN PEOPLE HAD WARNED YOU ALL ALREADY. PLEASE OPEN YOUR EYES AND READ PROPERLY THIS STORY IS DEDICATED TO ALL YAOI LOVERS, IF YOU DON'T LIKE, DON'T READ. I WARNED ALL OF YOU ALREADY SO PLEASE DON'T ANYHOW FLAME! Thank you.
| Title: IMPOSSIBLE
Reviewed By: Anonamous On: June 21, 2007 18:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE!!!For gods sake you friggin' yaoi fans think Naruto is gay! It is total disrespect to Mashashi-sama! I may be american but I know what manga is! It is almost ALWAYS male/female hentai! Take a look at all the possible loves. Naruto crushes on Sakura. Sasuke protects Sakura for his life. Sakura loves him for what he is. Mashashi Kishimoto-sama is my idol- and his manga does not induce any chance of yoai- SO STOP F***ING WRITING STUFF LIKE THIS!!!
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