| "Into The Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: GLily On: September 13, 2011 15:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yay, updates! It was a little hard figuring out what was going on in chapter 16 though, since chapter 15 didn't seem to be uploaded? When I open 15, I just get an empty chapter. When you have a moment,could you please check it? |
Title: kickass...PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
Reviewed By: HighOnInHalants [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 07:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it so far homie...love the dark feel through the whole thing its...delightfully disturbing thats a good explanation. i kind of did that with an Inu fanfic kept part of the original storyline but twisting it and throwing it through an alternative universe...fucking brutal. thought the whole naraku thing with kagura was quite hilarious...as far as grammar mistakes...shit when i use spellcheck AND look through it myself theres still things i missed no matter what. regardless girl it rocks so fucking far...please if you will put some gorily evil scenes in one of your later chapters soon cuz it will make your newest fan very pleased ;).... the friendly neighborhood stoner, rob p.s.: check out my Inu fic if you get the chance "Psychosis" its pretty twisted if you like that kinda stuff
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So she finally knows the truth (or will eventually believe it). Geez, who'da thunk Naraku to be a liar...LOL! Hell of a cliffy you left! Looking forward to the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 00:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What no cookies! *pouts*... Okay I love it and I like the fact that Sesshomaru's character is dark. I really feel for Rin. Are you sure you said this is a Sess/Rin fic...*checks notes* Yep, it sure does...lol. Well it's good to see an update... and about the cookies, since it's the holidays, I made my own batch of chocolate chip cookies, here...you can have some of mine...! Well until your next update, Chanda
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Title: animegirl007(not logged in)
Reviewed By: animegirl007 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 14:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm finally catching all on all of my story reading....and I must say this is "EXCELLENT"... I can't wait to read the next chapter...keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 18:47 EDT
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i love it one of the best work i ever red!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: July 10, 2007 21:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 17:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting. I'm anxious to see where you're going to take this.
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