Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 12:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my FUCKING GOD. you need a few grammar lessons, swack XD. kidding. Yeah, story line good. do you mind making the chapters just a tinsy bit..longer? Maybe add some stuff in (Why your repeating stuff)
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