| "Dagger in the Heart (R80 Style)" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: UPDATE ALREADY
Reviewed By: The Judge [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update this story because it is just starting to get good, so please UPDATE ALREADY
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Title: dude
Reviewed By: InuSan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
i've been wondering.. jus when are u gonna update dis..? itz been more den a year!! lol well If ur still even a member... Ja!
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: November 23, 2003 02:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Looking forward to more chapters.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good, Mr. R80, I hope you will update soon. I'm also glad that you haven't protrayed Davis as some sort of Bastard that enjoys hurting TK. Davis is in my mind, one of the least understood Digidestined in my opinion. He is not this insensitive jerk that people protray him as, he is a kind, caring person, who would do anything for his friends. I am glad you have protrayed him as just as you sayd "A pawn used by the backstabbing Kari." I am glad that there are others who see Davis as a person and not an Asshole. Thank you again and I hope you update soon. -Dragonmaster TC
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Reviewed By: Stranger On: September 21, 2003 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story so far! Please write more!
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Reviewed By: mediamon1.0 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
swwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeetttttt!!!! keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: Crow On: February 25, 2003 12:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I came across cliches in the past, but you happen to be one of best authors to write the worst cliches!! WHAT THE HELL WAS THIS CRAP FULL OF UTTER NONSENSE!!? |
Reviewed By: Tetsu On: February 25, 2003 06:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Very interesting, although I'll always be a takari-fan I actually enjoyed reading this. I've always liked your writing style, even since the fanfiction.net days and it's only improving. I really hope you can have the time to continue (and eventually finish) this and your other on-going fics. I can understand if you don't, being a collage-student myself.
Summary (the short-short version): great fic; please write more!
-Tetsu |
Reviewed By: Wyld Stallyns A.K.A. SerpentTreize On: February 24, 2003 22:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool, dude. You finally updated this fic. I'm like the way you dealt with the Kari and Davis situation. You didn't make Davis turn out to be a jerk about it. Ah well, I'll be waiting for this on FF.Net. |
Reviewed By: LOVE WITCH [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 06:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
You better be working on the next chap of this. i'm dying here. |
Reviewed By: Mojo On: October 04, 2002 15:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Can the story get any duller? I've seen Takari cliches so many times. By the way: I HATE TAKARIS COMPLETELY!! |
Reviewed By: SerpentTreize [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a big fan of Takari, but I'm starting to like the other couplings like Sokeru and Takimi. As long as TK is atleast hooked up with a girl, and a good one at that, I don't really mine the Daikari pairing. Although, I totally despise Daikari. I've read many of you fics, specifically the ones on FanFiction.Net. Even though I have never reviewed any of them, since I just started reading them a few days ago, I really enjoyed them all. Especially, the Takimi ones. And I really do like Takimi, 'cause, well its different and intriguing. I've already read the first two chapters of this on FanFiction.Net. So all i had to do was read the third chapter of this. Its stll very good, and I can't wait for TK and Mimi to hook up with each other. |
Reviewed By: Digifan316 On: June 30, 2002 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...so good. I like. Write more. |
Reviewed By: Kakaroto On: June 19, 2002 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
W0000000000000000000000000t! (BILL/TED/ME): MOST EXCELLENT FIC, DUDE! KEPP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Digifan316 On: June 18, 2002 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool fic man. Can't wait to see the rest. |
