| "Discovery" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: awesome
Reviewed By: cassidy On: August 12, 2008 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please rite another. that was so awesome and cute and so so good. please rite another. pretty please
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Reviewed By: Blue Flame Tigress On: October 11, 2002 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great and now that I think about it Steve and Kazuya look a bit alike, and Nina just fricking rocks, but my brothers hate her cuz I kick there butts her. |
Reviewed By: idy On: August 24, 2002 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey,that was a really great story. |
Reviewed By: Sherry On: July 05, 2002 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*BANG!* Wooo! Oh, darn, I missed! Anyway, it was a damn good fic, friend. Now, I'll read your other masterpiece! |
Reviewed By: Aoi Shinkiro [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still envy you.
Yep, the last part was nice, funny, and um...nice. Heh, "Sicko list". |
Reviewed By: TaoStrife [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh heh... you know what? I like this version even more than the one at ff.net - the revised ending is very sweet and funny. All in all I love this: the couple is quite an unusual one, but you really make it work and be believable, and as always it's handled with loads of style. I hope you'll continue this or do a sequel - whatever you choose, I'll be looking forward to reading it! |
