| "If I Told You I'd Have to Kill You" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Cyfris [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 22:39 CDT
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WOW! Its so good! I'm picky about what i read, so for me that's a good compliment. PLEASE get the next chapter out soon! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mau [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 19:26 CDT
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yay you updated! nice chap, And I am sorry about your computer. Mine crashed too and I had to rebot my computer erasing everything. Hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: CRAZY GURL On: September 17, 2002 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story plz more more more PLZ :'( i think i'm gonna cry if u dont |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mau [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I don' think it is boring~! Heep up the good work~! ^_^ v |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 21:26 CDT
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keep writin plz!!!! |
Reviewed By: emeraldiris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 03:24 CDT
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Wow, great fic so far. Please continue it. It is starting to get really interesting! |
Reviewed By: Kay On: August 02, 2002 01:34 CDT
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I like it. No wait...I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE....Oh yeah....almost forgot ta say...*clears throat* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!! with a cherry on top! |
Reviewed By: Bil [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. First off, the title's fun! Oh, and so's the story.
A few nitpicks. I don't know if you'll care or not. First paragraph of the first chapter you change from first person to third person for a sentence. Also, isn't the CIA an American organisation? So why are they recruiting Japanese teenagers?! It really doesn't matter, I was just curious.
Does Meilin have magic in this fic (the sensing Sakura's aura thing)?
Last thing: the glove gadget at the end of Chapter 3. How can you hold someone's hand for 30 seconds without them getting irritated? It doesn't seem like it, but 30 seconds can be a long time. My brother had fun coming up with a million excuses to try and stall. I suppose you could just gush like an idiot and pump their hand vigorously (and hope they've forgotten you by morning ;) ).
Anyway. Interesting story so far. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Icy flame On: July 07, 2002 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really cute! Can't wait to see what happens next! Love the whole plot line and such! This is so adorable! hehe It makes me laugh! Anyways loving it, can't wait for more! Later yo |
Reviewed By: Mystical_Fascination [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 12:29 CDT
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i like it |
Reviewed By: God Of Death's Little Angel On: July 01, 2002 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this and hope you get the next chapter out soon! This is really awesome, the plot is interesting and creative. The characters are very realistic! You are a very talented author! Later |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 15:16 CDT
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keep goin write more soon!! |
Reviewed By: Unknown On: August 05, 2002 16:42 CDT
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Saw your fic. Read it. And loved it. Could you please write more, I like it and I want to know what happens. |
