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| "Broken Hearts Parade" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: snowdragon On: July 09, 2007 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just do me a BIG favor, and make sure Relena does NOT end up with Heero. That's all I ask. Well, and I would love Duo and Heero to hook up, but then, well, Zechs is pretty hot, too. Hmm. Decisions. Anyhow, this is a really fun story. I love the intimidation factor of Duo wearing a gundam patch. People SHOULD cower in fear of the great Shinigami! Damn straight! Of course, he's big enough to forgive ex-Ozzies, so long as they really ARE ex...and don't still harbor animosity towards HIM. If so, he'll just have to beat them upside the head until they see reason. Anyhow, this is a fun story, and I'll be looking forward to more. Either you put up three chapters at once, or I've been lax in my reading. I'll try to review more often!
| Title: Yay
Reviewed By: JennyD On: June 25, 2007 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I'm starting to like this fic. On the pairings....I want both. Ha, no seriously though, all I recommend is maybe some type of crazy, mildly heart shattering love triangle, that eventually gets resolved. Everyone loves a little sap now and again. I hope to see more of this fic! Oh, and good job.
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