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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant believe i wasnt able to review this whole last week! >< my internet shut down x_x but i really like your story! :D i like how inu and kag got back together again ^^ lol, hojo gay! thats hilarious :3 thanks for updating so fast!
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Reviewed By: fishesrcool69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 23:18 CDT
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I read the ending a while ago and don't think I commented on it ... and if I did ... well I'm doing it again! This story is amazing. Totally amazing. Best one yet. Your two new ones are cute (Weeds not as good as the others, but still cute), but this can't be beaten! I thought nothing could beat Past Mind, Present Body (not even it's sequel), but you proved that wrong. This is your best story yet and I have fallen in love with it! I never really got into the alternate universe stories, though I have seen some good ones. With yours it's like I don't even care if it's alternate universe, your stories are amazing. Plus, you're one of the few authors I comment often. Most of the time I comment once the whole story and then I'm done, but I'm obsessed with your writing! Very odd how you made Hojo gay ... but I love it! Kagome seemed very flippy about what she wanted kind of like Paige from 'The Prince And Me' and it made me fall even more in love with the story because although the movie was very played out and shit, it was refreshingly cute, like this story! I really love your writing a lot! I love it, love it, love it!!! Uhm ... I'm going to end this comment soon before I seem like a stalker :] Well, you should really keep writing stories, especially Inuyasha fan fiction since you get the personalities so well and also because you update often (pretty much everyday) so I have to assume it is what you enjoy writing. If you one day like disappeared and stopped writing I'd really cry! You own and I cry at the end of every story you write because I know they have to end somewhere and it depresses me when they do. See, yo even got someone to cry :] Yay you! Damn, my hand is starting to hurt from all the typing. I've retyped so many things because nothing seems to describe how great your work is well enough. YOU ROCK!
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is so amazing! it's one of my faves! thanks for the epilogue!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 14:42 CDT
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To bad its over but thank God you are creating a new story, as a sequal....Is it going to have to do with their daugters??...do they have a son??........I do/did love reading this story and I hope you post the new story soon.....Is it going to give me mental anguash like You other stories do....lol....I would have wrote a coment earlier but my family forst me to have a life and go see fireworks...XD.....They were koo though...Redlands has the best fireworkes ever...hehe.....I sooooooooo new that Hojo was guy...hehe....you have to admit that I called it.....I called it hehe.......I'm waiting so creat the sequeal soon hehe.....Nyuka.....P.s. Love you stories
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 12:34 CDT
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wonderful and lovely ending... i really loved it... great story... amazing work!... good job! until next story...
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Reviewed By: adeaneri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lovedit cant wait for more.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 22:09 CDT
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looking forward to the epilogue...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 22:08 CDT
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wonderful story... really loved it... amazing... great work... will look forward to other stories you'll write... good job!
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was soooo wonderful!!!! I hope you write more stories! I've certainly enjoyed this one and I thank you soooooo much for writing it!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 14:53 CDT
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just lovely, and i will surely read ur other story
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome new chapter, your story is amazing!
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Title: ZOMG
Reviewed By: RyuuMahou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, completely awesome! I always love those fics that make me want to yell at the characters for being stupid. They never listen to me, but I never stop trying...you know what I mean? Anyway, great fic! I can't believe the end of chapter 17! Hojo is gay, isn't he?! XDDD That just made me smile. And made my family look at me strangely...but not like they don't already do that! Now, I'm going to be a stereotypical reviewer and demand that you update soon! I know that you just updated today, but yeh can't stop me from askin'! ~Emi
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 18:09 CDT
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I was right wasn't I Hojo is guy and he ends up with Jakotsu....That is so wrong but yet that means every thing will be ok with Kagome....I bet he doesn't even have that disses I bet he was guy the hole time and wasn't turned on by her but he didn't want people to think he was guy....that has to be it....oooooooo I can't wait be tomarro right now....I got to read the next chapter....ya know you sill are the fastes updater on my list and I thankyou for that....XD.....I'm so glad that they are getting back together....It makes me so happy......so happy......Ok Up date as soon as you can......Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I need to know what happens!! your story is great!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 14:18 CDT
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yo is the dude jakotsu, plz say it ain't so, but good story, glad that kagome and inuyasha are getting back togather, and that hopefully her break wit hoko will go welll......lol......i know it wont but hey maybe no hard feelings.aww so she can't have ne beautiful children by our sexy hanyou? wat a shame
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 12:40 CDT
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great chapter update... liked it... finally Kagome is coming around... is it safe to guess that Hojo is gay and slept with Jakotsu?... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 22:10 CDT
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I lOve this fic but it causes such mental anguash...hehe...I must be insain....hehe...So have you that about have hojo get it by a train..hu..tempting Isn't it....hehe..ok I'm defienetly insain.....the only way I could attempt to cure it is if you write another chapter....realy soon....hehe.....JK...there is no cure for my insanity....but I would be koo if you update as soon as you can any ways....hehe......I got to see how ya get them back together....wait Hojo can turn out to be guy and goes with the guy from the band of seven that I can't ever spell his name...but ya.....I'm so mean to Hojo...but he desurves it for taking Kagome away form Inuyasha...XD.....Ok up date realy soon....Nyuka
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Title: Frustrated
Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 15:30 CDT
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I really love your fanfic!! You have to update soon!! I really hope kagome realizes she needs inuyasha and that they should be together! I dont want them to die. ^^ You're saved in my favorites so i cant wait till you update! Although i have noticed one thing about your style of writing you say 'he asks' or 'she asks' you are not very descriptive. But its ok! I really liked the story. keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 13:51 CDT
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P.S. it would be interesting if she did find out that Hojo did turn out to be gay... update soon please...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 13:50 CDT
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great chapter update... Kagome is so stupid though... she wasn't really thinking when she left... she could have all the opportunities if she stayed... anyway hope you update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Brookie07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is an awesome fic , you had a few grammatical and spelling errors, but therwise I am loving it , I have ADD so it takes alot to get my attention , and your story had me on the edge of my seat , it is amazing , please post more soon
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 22:28 CDT
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Ya know he could alway get hit by a train then she wouldn't feel guilty about leaving him....but then again I guess things don't work out like that..... And Sesshoumaru he was koo...he wasn't to agressive and he gave Kagome a job.....I think Sesshoumaru was realy worried that he would loss his little brother and that is why he hird her am I right??...because if she works there she will be forced to see him every day...................come on he'll go to a better place....It could even be accsedent that he fell on to the train tracks...he doesn't have to be tied down to await his doom...Hojo wont know hit him..much less a train....hehe...I was soo right to you had what happend after he woke up and then the time skip....They have to get back together....one because they will die if they don't and two because they were made for each other..... I await you next update....*twich* pashently....who am I kidding I need to read this fic....please update as soon as possible.....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the update, it was awesome! please write some more!!
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, I'm begging you and i hate begging, please update. This story is great and I need to know what happens to them.
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:48 CDT
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oh mannnn!!! Kagome needs to make up her mind! she knows she needs him and loves him but she's too worried about supporting herself that she's not looking at the bigger picture!!! ughhh! it frustrates me! but it's really good, pplease update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:33 CDT
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A time skip is coming up now right...hu......well that was something ya don't see in fruitsbasket...hehe.....So where can she go to where he wont find her...she is officialy his mate now...so now he can't even forget about her....I wander if Kagome reolized that when she did that to him....poor guy...and if she ever came back she would probably believe that he wouldn't want to see her...thats so depressing...Well I hope you update as soon as possible because getting more then one chapter in a day is the best thing ever espeshal when I realy like the story....the funny thing is alot of time I end up reading a story but I don't like how it is turning out but I can stop reading it and its thoughs authors who update regulary...I would have to say this is the first story I truly in joy that has quick updates...that makes me so happy....ssooooooo are you going to have what Inuyasha thinks when he wakes up or are you going to go strate to a time skip and have flash backs of his pain...or maybe your going to do something compleatly different I don't care just as long as you update soon XD....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:21 CDT
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great chapter updates... but kinda sad with what Kagome keeps doing to Inuyasha... hope everything works out in the upcoming chapters... don't worry about the story being short or long... it's your decision if you think the story is complete... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 15:40 CDT
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Poor Inuyasha left again...so sad....he kept baiting her...I was afaid he was going to put some kind of mate mark on her with out he consent....I'm glad he didn't because that would screw things up....Why would Koga go over to Inuyashas any way if they hate each other??.... They did admit that they loved each other...how sad that she just left....sigh*.....I hope this doesn't happen because it would be so long befor they see each other but when I read the last sentences I felt like they would not see eachother for a few years...be for they found each other again....I would be romanitic but if a couple Months did that to Inuyasha then a few years would kill him.....some thing came to mind when I was reading this it reminded me of fruitsbasket....How Kagome had know where to go and was taken in by a family that wasn't realy adopting and she descovered a secret about the family...she did all the cooking....then when She had to leave she felt empty inside....but in fruitsbasket they came to take her back and she want to go back and she let her self go back....jut in case you never watched the anime or read the manga......I have a question when I when to my E-mail this after noon it had to new chapters but when I opened them they were the same chapter...weard hu...just thought I would ask.....Ok please up date soon....and as soon as posible....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 07:28 CDT
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AWWWW!!! When are they gonna admit it to each other that they really do love each other? It's getting really interesting ya know. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: love_is_absolete_yet_we_need_it [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 03:29 CDT
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I love the story! God damn I wish that the next chapter was up...I want to keep reading gah. So update reall soon! ^_^
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