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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT FIC!! plz update soon!!
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Title: Take that ya stuped people
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 00:46 CDT
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YES SHE ESCAPED...I hope those people go to jail....to bad this couldn't have been worked out befor Kagome lost her first kiss and her vergenity...It just isn't right.....So how is Inuyasha going to play in to this story??...and were are they going to go??....I hope things work out all right.....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 23:49 CDT
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interesting chapter update... too bad for Kagome though... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: Pain
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 20:32 CDT
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That was horrible....Kagome has be mudilated.....she..this can't happen to her...O my gost this can't be right....What will she do now...YOu have to update very soon you can't just leave it at that....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
......wow. when you said abusive father you weren't kidding. i wasn't expecting this lol. can't wait for the next chappy! now all these little ideas are scrambling about in my brain all chanting "what's going to happen? what's going to happen?" @.@ poor kagome
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 23:19 CDT
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interesting chapter with a twist... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: love_is_absolete_yet_we_need_it [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 21:27 CDT
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I like the story so far. The family is really creepy.. Well hope you update soon =)) -pez-
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Reviewed By: Mabbline991220 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 20:28 CDT
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this story seems like it's gonna be good. SO what's gonna happen to Kagome...ARE they gonna like put her on the streets and turn her into a prositute...or like a whore house??? The family they got adopted could have just like became foster parents and then they could have got money that way I saw something like that on Law and Order SVU Well I hope you update soon your story is good so0o far !!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 18:57 CDT
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I don't like the way they said that.....Are they going to stick her in a whore house.....Isn't there laws against that??......O ya be for I forget I was about the first chapter...didn't they have an innsurance polocy on their mom....wouldn't they get money from that.....O well I how she can get away from this family befor it's to late.....Please update soon.... XD....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 12:36 CDT
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Hey! Me likey! Who saved Kagome? Was it Inuyasha? Or someone else? Is Jii-chan dead? AHH! Update!
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Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, i'm reading, i'm liking.....hmmmmm. Keep it up!^^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 23:58 CDT
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interesting story... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 23:31 CDT
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i am truly intrigued by this. hmm. i wanna know how this story goes :P to my favorite list! update soon k?
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Title: Hi ya!
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 20:24 CDT
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This sounds like the beginning of a good story.....so whats Kagome going to do now......it so sad that their mom died...if you ask me I think that the IRS wouldn't come that quick...and wouldn't their need to be a bairal or a memorial survice for their mom....Also what happen to their Grandpa....is he dead??....And wouldn't The kids go to like an aunt or unkle befor they were taken away.....I need more info. So you gota update soon and fill me it...hehe...Nyuka
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