Reviewed By: itoshii On: March 24, 2010 23:33 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I loved it. Im surprised to not see any reviews but maybe I just cant find it seeing as how Im new to this site. I've never read a concept like this and you brought it forth easily. I sort of did like your ending at chapter 2. It leaves a longing in your reader. Good work!