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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i loved this!!! i really liked it u did a great job on everything and now i think im gonna check out ur other stories cuz im sure those r goin to be great too
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2009 14:30 CDT
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T-T.....I ...I though I had this under my favorits....T-T....why didn't it tell me when you updated.....*Wwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa*......I could have read the rest of the story sooner....how sad....but gosh was it entertaing....I can't believe I was able to find it again......I'm so glade everything worked out.....but that can't be the last chapter.....you got to have an epiloge so we know they lived happliy ever after....XD..........I hope you do write one.............Ya .............Nyuka
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Title: cha[ 10
Reviewed By: Kazeli [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i loved it that was a wonderful fic. nice ending too. i defintly wil keep an eye out for your other stories. I noticed no grammer errors in this chapter. this story was well formated
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Title: woops! chap 8 er i ment cahp 9 for dat last review
Reviewed By: Kazeli [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is awsome
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Title: chap 8 *spoiler*
Reviewed By: Kazeli [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha my fav part in chap 8 lol "Alright, then I'll go search for Kouga." Kagome volunteered. "Like hell you are!" Inuyasha growled. Kagome turned a fierce glare at him. "And why can't I?!" "That mangy wolf will probably kidnap you again!" he argued. "Kidnap you?" Yusuke asked. "Again?" Kurama asked, staring down at her waiting for an answer. lamo i loved it great work. i noticed a gramer error but forgot to make note of it. great work!
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 16:29 CDT
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Great ending- very cute. Talk to you soon I hope! PS I found a perfect theme song for this fic.
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Reviewed By: NaturesPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 09:21 CDT
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This is awesome! At first when I read your summary I was like, huh? Kagome as a superhero like sailor moon, but it turned out spectacularly. Kur/Kag is also my favorite paring so thats good. Please update soon!
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Title: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Shikon-Tenshi-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME UPDATE!!! YOU ARE SO GOOD!!! I know you just updated but... PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLE ASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!P LEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE !PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEA SE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PL EASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE! PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEAS E!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLE ASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!P LEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE !PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEA SE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PL EASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE! PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!UPDATE AGAIN/SOON!!!!!!! Update please as soon as u can!!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 22:16 CDT
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You're welcome! ^^ awesome chapter...ah next comes the big finale; so sad that its come to an end already. You did not lie! Very funny chapter. The comparison between Stewie and Hiei... definitely not something I'd ever pictured before... and somehow now I see it. Great job as always! -Jackie
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Title: chap 8
Reviewed By: Kazeli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* woot cliffhanger!! >> loved the chap um i look foward to the next one:D
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Title: yay!!!!!
Reviewed By: Shikon-Tenshi-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YOU UPDATED!!! And BTW that was SO CUTE OF KURAMA AND KAGOME!!! AWW!!! I SO love this fic EVEN MORE!!!! Hope ya update again!!!!
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Title: zomg awsome
Reviewed By: Kazeli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowo wow oh wow ow owo this is such a great fic!!! i love it the story is def orignal and i love how its flowing this is a nice long read. definatly going on my favs list this story is! please oh please update soon:D
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 12:38 CDT
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wow! I love this fic! It's sailor moon meets ghost files + inuyasha AND some tokyo mew mewness!! Wonderful and very original. (though when Kagome says "Forbiden Crystal Power" i'm adding "makeup" at the end in my mind!) ^__^
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Title: Excellent!!!
Reviewed By: Shikon-Tenshi-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ON some parts on your other chapters you accidently keep on writing Kagome and Sango's name when they were in their Forbidden Jewel Form and when The Sds didn't know them yet. But still it VERY good! I hope you update soon! This fic ROCKS!!!
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 01:37 CDT
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Awesome update- can't wait to see what the nekos got themselves into. TTYL
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