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Title: Excellent!!!
Reviewed By: Shikon-Tenshi-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ON some parts on your other chapters you accidently keep on writing Kagome and Sango's name when they were in their Forbidden Jewel Form and when The Sds didn't know them yet. But still it VERY good! I hope you update soon! This fic ROCKS!!!
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 01:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome update- can't wait to see what the nekos got themselves into. TTYL
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Reviewed By: WhitC On: March 14, 2009 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! An update finally!! I love this story! Please update soon I want to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: BloodForbiddenVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 09:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is an interesting story
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Reviewed By: Erurie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 17:01 CDT
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I enjoyed your story so far and can not whate for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 07:09 CST
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this was really good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 20:34 CST
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Are you going to update soon please say that you will....I realy am looking forward to the next chapter.....XD
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm, well, the whole broach thing is kinda weird, but you write well, and are developing this story well, IMO. I am looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 22:19 CST
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What a great fic you may only have Three chapters at the moment but there realy long compared to some of the fic's I read which made it realy easy to get absorbed into the plot.....I already love it by the way....I hope you do what you said and update soon.....XD..................Oh-yeah one question how come when Kagome first transformed you said her eyes changed from their normal brown to silver.....when you mentions befor and in this last chapter that she had deap blue eyes..............oh no could it be that kagome is color crisis her eyes can't chose a color....first blue then brown then silver then back to blue......wait I think I'm seeing a pattern.............hehe...Just playen...........so update soon.........Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Kagome lady of the Rain 2 On: November 26, 2007 16:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Great work! I really lovedd it! I didn't really feel like loging in so I just so you know this is Kagome Lady of the Rain.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Monk-MIko On: November 24, 2007 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started to read this story and I must say that it has gotten me interested in it. I just hope that you have a new chapter soon cause this story does look very good. You did a great job on writing this cause I am a big fan of Kurama and Kagome couples.
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Reviewed By: optimistic_cynic On: November 24, 2007 20:01 CST
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Awesome! KagKur are the best! Hmmmm, I wonder who the other two girls are... could one of them be keiko? or yukina? no, it cant be yukina, shes already a demon...hmmmmm..... anywho, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 10:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
kawaii!! i love it! please up date soon!! will there be lemons later? ja!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 16:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice! Update soon!
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