| "Fall of the Mighty" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lav On: June 30, 2002 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta is very well potrayed. I kinda feel sorry for Goku, but that's understandable. Love it, keep it up... |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 21:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! it's just starting to get good!!! Write more! and Post it! Post it now!!! Please? Love you forever if you do, Rogue! god, the angst of it all!!! Thankies!!!
Chibi Hoshi* |
Reviewed By: sunrissa On: June 26, 2002 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fic! I love the idea. can't w8 for chap 4. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT'S SO SAD!!! POOR KAKY!!! AND POOR VIDEL!!! *runs around in tears* This isn't fair!!!! I wanted to see the baby!!!! SHAME ON GOHAN!!!! *hides in a corner* |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 05:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woah! O.O I like this! What happens next? Love blossoming? ANSWER ME DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Maria Cline [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 06:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooohhh... this is very intense! I can't wait to read more... what happened to Goku and Vegita? And will they ever be healed? |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you bastard SOB!!! How dare you leave us hanging like that!!! MORE!! I WANT MORE, I TELL YOU!!! so finish it, Please? Pretty please?? you can't end it, you promised us yaoi!! and lots of it!! and if you dont' post it here, please email your chapters to me at chibihoshi@neo-tokyo.org , cause I LOVE IT, and I WANT MORE!! Thankies!!
Chibi Hoshi* |
Reviewed By: Sluggy On: June 18, 2002 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not usually a big yaoi fan, but I'm a huge vegeta fan...you have to continue this soon or I'll find you someday and beat you up...or something |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
*giggles* That wouldn't me little ol' me you're having to appease to keep yourself "from being ripped apart," would it? *not-so-hastily hides razor-sharp katana behind her back* It's going great, but there were a lot of weird mood swings in that last chapter that weren't explained very well. The actions seem kinda jerky, if you know what I mean. But it still sounds good to me! You'd think Vegeta'd be more outraged that Kakarott had dared to kiss him, rather than at the hurt in his eyes. very interesting. so post more! you've said you've got more, so post it! Now! Please? Thankies muchly!
Chibi Hoshi* |
Reviewed By: TheRedButler On: July 03, 2002 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya. I like your fanfic. Don't let the lack of reviews on mm.org discourage you. Keep on writing! More Gogeta fic!!!!!! |
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