| "Fall of the Mighty" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nathaly On: September 17, 2002 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found you, I found you..*is hopping around*..
Oh!..*sits down*
Thats so sad! No baby? *looks disappointed* What effect will this have on the relation of Goku and Vegeta. Vegeta was so caringly. Hope he will not stop this. Goku is still his mate.
All bad comes together. There will not be a great party the next time, I guess! Poor Spice, life isn't easy for her either.
Gohan needs some help. But first make him realize. He should think a little bit.
Ah, and update soon!! |
Reviewed By: ShadowRose On: September 17, 2002 15:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOOOOO!! I'm so happy it was here. I was reading on ff.net and I thought I the fic went away buuuuuut it's here WOOOOOOOT!! |
Reviewed By: Crafty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::sobs:: That's so unfair! Goku would've made a great father. Vegeta, too, in his own way. And it's unfair for purely selfish reasons...I wanted to see the baby and learn more about it! That's so sad. I got chills when Spice disowned Gohan. Please don't keep us waiting too long with the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Xero On: September 17, 2002 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! Poor Vegeta! Poor Kaky! I wanted to see the baby!
If this makes Vegeta try to leave again, I'm gonna hunt you down, dearie..... Time for him to learn to think about Kakarot first.
BTW, thanks for e-mailing me about the MM switch! |
Reviewed By: Goku Mum On: September 17, 2002 11:07 CDT
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Poor baby, will you give some explanation for the miscarriage, except of the blown? The whole situation seems to be quite messed up. I'm eager to read what you are making of this. |
Reviewed By: Star Spangle Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 20:44 CDT
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OMG! *sniffles* Poor Goku...and watch out Gohan...you'll be meeting Videl in heaven when Veggie gets his hands on you!
Another great chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Fate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you decided to post this here! Damn ff.net... Anyway, I loved the chappie. *reaches for her spork* I insist that you write more. After all you don't wanna leave us hanging for too long, right? |
Reviewed By: Casey Emerilza On: September 14, 2002 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is excellent. Your story has kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Hurry and update..I am going nutz! |
Reviewed By: Crafty On: September 13, 2002 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading all the chapters posted so far, and I love it! Please, please update soon! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 03:36 CDT
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Hrm, not fond of Gohan are you? He's giving the Saijan couple the most trouble and now it looks like he's about to end up as a smear on the wall! V. may be exhausted but that ain't gonna help Gohan much now! Oh dear.... *cringes waiting for first punch to land* |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 15:21 CDT
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ooooo. Freiza? *growls and hisses at the alien lizard* ¬.¬; *waits in excitement for the next installment* |
Reviewed By: annonymous On: September 02, 2002 18:14 CDT
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LMAO, ah MAN, this is a really good fic. Since It's a Ve/Go pairing and Goku's PREGNANT, I figured it would be mostly humor. But it's more, SO much more! And u should keep it going! Lol, can't wait until the later months of the pregnancy... What happens when Goku starts having back pains from the weight, what about when the morning sickness passes and Goku's already MASSIVE appetite gets bigger, and *gasps* O.O OMG, could u picture them BABY SHOPPING?!?!? *begins to laugh until she starts to hyperventilate* Ok, ok... ^_^, I think I've put my 2 cents worth, u just keep putting in chapters.... k? |
Reviewed By: annonymous On: September 02, 2002 18:14 CDT
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LMAO, ah MAN, this is a really good fic. Since It's a Ve/Go pairing and Goku's PREGNANT, I figured it would be mostly humor. But it's more, SO much more! And u should keep it going! Lol, can't wait until the later months of the pregnancy... What happens when Goku starts having back pains from the weight, what about when the morning sickness passes and Goku's already MASSIVE appetite gets bigger, and *gasps* O.O OMG, could u picture them BABY SHOPPING?!?!? *begins to laugh until she starts to hyperventilate* Ok, ok... ^_^, I think I've put my 2 cents worth, u just keep putting in chapters.... k? |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2002 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the part with Piccolo being attacked by the kids... the same goes for Vegeta. Children are a riot when they are young and explorative! anyway, I loved the chapter!!! I was laughing so hard when Goku blew up on Trunks and THEN Gohan! It was priceless!!! oi, you sure know how to tickle my funny bone. *wishes she could have some ice cream with Goku too, but she knows she's lactos intolerant* *runs off for so italian ice instead* : D |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2002 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was all funny. Personally, I'm glad you've written the last two chapters conserning the families. I'm terrible with remembering names and I'm able to get a better sense of who all the characters are and which of the parents they belong to. *lol* I'm still trying to remember them all... I confuse myself some times...I've got about over 150 home made characters and I'm trying to keep em all in order... (it's hard) Anyway, good chapter! Keep the good stuff coming! ^_^ |
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