| "Fall of the Mighty" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kioko On: July 09, 2002 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH, another chapter! The only thing that I found ...dare I say "wrong"...was that well...(hesitantly) I got confused during the lemon and I had to go back and re-read parts of the chapter to understand what was going on. But other than that it was a perfect chapter!
Hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: Kioko On: July 03, 2002 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is GREAT! to tell you the truth I don't thing the raiting fits the story though.
heheh...poor Vegeta indeed. ^^;
Please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 21:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Chinsy with reviews?? ME??? *brandishes large mallet pulled from cyberspace* I review every time I read! But that's only cause I love it! and Vegeta's so sweet with his granddaughter!!! *big sparkly eyes* it's so Kawaii!! of course, we all love Vegeta anyway, and it's because he's an arrogant bastard, not beside it... *sighs* Okay, so it's great!! Post more!!! Love it, Rogue!!
Chibi Hoshi* |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is turning out to be a very interesting Yaoi fic :) it's funny too...Keep writing and I'll keep reading :) |
Reviewed By: B-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 08:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dear writer,
This is Veresti reviewing your lovely peice of work. I must say that I quite enjoyed reading it and hope you will get the next chapter out soon.
Love,
Veresti
(Who d@mn mediaminer.org won't let change her pen name) |
Reviewed By: Lav On: June 30, 2002 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta is very well potrayed. I kinda feel sorry for Goku, but that's understandable. Love it, keep it up... |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 21:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! it's just starting to get good!!! Write more! and Post it! Post it now!!! Please? Love you forever if you do, Rogue! god, the angst of it all!!! Thankies!!!
Chibi Hoshi* |
Reviewed By: sunrissa On: June 26, 2002 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fic! I love the idea. can't w8 for chap 4. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT'S SO SAD!!! POOR KAKY!!! AND POOR VIDEL!!! *runs around in tears* This isn't fair!!!! I wanted to see the baby!!!! SHAME ON GOHAN!!!! *hides in a corner* |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 05:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woah! O.O I like this! What happens next? Love blossoming? ANSWER ME DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Maria Cline [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 06:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooohhh... this is very intense! I can't wait to read more... what happened to Goku and Vegita? And will they ever be healed? |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you bastard SOB!!! How dare you leave us hanging like that!!! MORE!! I WANT MORE, I TELL YOU!!! so finish it, Please? Pretty please?? you can't end it, you promised us yaoi!! and lots of it!! and if you dont' post it here, please email your chapters to me at chibihoshi@neo-tokyo.org , cause I LOVE IT, and I WANT MORE!! Thankies!!
Chibi Hoshi* |
Reviewed By: Sluggy On: June 18, 2002 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not usually a big yaoi fan, but I'm a huge vegeta fan...you have to continue this soon or I'll find you someday and beat you up...or something |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
*giggles* That wouldn't me little ol' me you're having to appease to keep yourself "from being ripped apart," would it? *not-so-hastily hides razor-sharp katana behind her back* It's going great, but there were a lot of weird mood swings in that last chapter that weren't explained very well. The actions seem kinda jerky, if you know what I mean. But it still sounds good to me! You'd think Vegeta'd be more outraged that Kakarott had dared to kiss him, rather than at the hurt in his eyes. very interesting. so post more! you've said you've got more, so post it! Now! Please? Thankies muchly!
Chibi Hoshi* |
Reviewed By: TheRedButler On: July 03, 2002 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya. I like your fanfic. Don't let the lack of reviews on mm.org discourage you. Keep on writing! More Gogeta fic!!!!!! |
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