| "Fall of the Mighty" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 15:21 CDT
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ooooo. Freiza? *growls and hisses at the alien lizard* ¬.¬; *waits in excitement for the next installment* |
Reviewed By: annonymous On: September 02, 2002 18:14 CDT
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LMAO, ah MAN, this is a really good fic. Since It's a Ve/Go pairing and Goku's PREGNANT, I figured it would be mostly humor. But it's more, SO much more! And u should keep it going! Lol, can't wait until the later months of the pregnancy... What happens when Goku starts having back pains from the weight, what about when the morning sickness passes and Goku's already MASSIVE appetite gets bigger, and *gasps* O.O OMG, could u picture them BABY SHOPPING?!?!? *begins to laugh until she starts to hyperventilate* Ok, ok... ^_^, I think I've put my 2 cents worth, u just keep putting in chapters.... k? |
Reviewed By: annonymous On: September 02, 2002 18:14 CDT
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LMAO, ah MAN, this is a really good fic. Since It's a Ve/Go pairing and Goku's PREGNANT, I figured it would be mostly humor. But it's more, SO much more! And u should keep it going! Lol, can't wait until the later months of the pregnancy... What happens when Goku starts having back pains from the weight, what about when the morning sickness passes and Goku's already MASSIVE appetite gets bigger, and *gasps* O.O OMG, could u picture them BABY SHOPPING?!?!? *begins to laugh until she starts to hyperventilate* Ok, ok... ^_^, I think I've put my 2 cents worth, u just keep putting in chapters.... k? |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2002 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the part with Piccolo being attacked by the kids... the same goes for Vegeta. Children are a riot when they are young and explorative! anyway, I loved the chapter!!! I was laughing so hard when Goku blew up on Trunks and THEN Gohan! It was priceless!!! oi, you sure know how to tickle my funny bone. *wishes she could have some ice cream with Goku too, but she knows she's lactos intolerant* *runs off for so italian ice instead* : D |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2002 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was all funny. Personally, I'm glad you've written the last two chapters conserning the families. I'm terrible with remembering names and I'm able to get a better sense of who all the characters are and which of the parents they belong to. *lol* I'm still trying to remember them all... I confuse myself some times...I've got about over 150 home made characters and I'm trying to keep em all in order... (it's hard) Anyway, good chapter! Keep the good stuff coming! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 14:27 CDT
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I love the different reactions of the family, it allows for developement in the plot. I await the period of time that Goku's stomach begins to grow... *giggles* |
Reviewed By: Manawolf On: August 26, 2002 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason the whole fic's not a 10 is because it's not finished yet! Normally I squick at male pregnancy fanfics, but I am an incurable Vegeta fan... and the characters are really handled very well. Keep it coming... pleeeeease? |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2002 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for chapter 15. I'm loving it! I've seen a lot of fanfics with Vegeta pregnant, but not many with Goku. *lol* I'll bet their child will be sooooo handsome!!! |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I can't say I didn't see this coming, but I like it! :) Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I haven't reviewed so far, but I just gotta say, love the "Pitch Black" reference! One of my favorite movies. You really should write a fic based on what little Vegeta told of his story there! I would like to see that.
Also, it might make your story easier to read if you start a new paragraph when a new person starts talking. Those big paragraphs with everything mushed together get a little tedious. And also, this chapter and the last seem to be too wide for the screen... I don't know why it wrapped weird this time, but you might want to take a look at it.
Good story so far! I usually don't read yaoi, but this is good. You've kept characterization pretty consistant. Off to read the rest... |
Reviewed By: Shayne On: August 01, 2002 17:02 CDT
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Wow! I'm so glad that I found this fic! @.@ It's so great! I love it! Is there anyway that you could email me when the next chapter comes out?
Love,
Shayne
P.S. butterfly_in_reverese@evilportal.com |
Reviewed By: SaiyaSith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And you just LEFT it there??? AAAH! This is a really cool story. Sometimes I indulge and read yaoi's, and this is a cute one. I love the whole "breeding stock" thing! I never considered this angle! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi On: July 15, 2002 21:15 CDT
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okay, so?? More!! I know this isn't the last chappie!! but it was a good one. good angst. It makes sense that Vegeta would have a hard time dealing with intimacy with someone stronger than him, based on his past... I love it!! Do please write more, okay? Thankies muchly!!
Chibi Hoshi* |
Reviewed By: sunrissa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really Njoy this fic and it is very well written. Can't w8 till the next chap! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 23:15 CDT
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Oh Rogue!!! that was so wonderful!!! I loved it!!! yay!!! *_* (sighs) and I have this thing about Goku calling Vegeta Ouji-sama... you know he's gotta love it!! and I love the way you orchestrated the scene. they were kinda thrown into it, but I loved it!! thankies!!!
Chibi Hoshi* |
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