| "Fall of the Mighty" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: knightwulfash On: September 19, 2002 19:22 CDT
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great twist in ch22 sucks for the family but hey great for a good story. this is definitly one of my favorite fanfics. |
Reviewed By: Blood Roses On: September 18, 2002 13:54 CDT
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Heh... so this is going to be a Piccolo and Gohan fic as well?
Kind of disappointing, the Goku miscarriage I mean. It's going to disappoint a lot of fans. But it also adds a lot of angst to the story and makes it a bit more distinguished than if you would have went along with the stereo-typical happy factor that most sheep (prep or uninventive, uncreative people) would have gone with. Heh, very interesting. I want to see where you are going with this. |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! I didn't think you'd take my suggestion about losing the baby seriously! *sniff* And poor Spice! What's she gonna do now? This story seems like it's turning more into her tale than Vegeta and Goku's. Hm. I guess next chapter we'll get Vegeta's reaction to the news, huh? Ouch. Can't wait to see it! |
Reviewed By: kia On: September 17, 2002 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*griiins* whoo! your story just gets wilder and wilder. drama-mama! ok, i don't often come to mediaminer.org, but just for you.....*lol* |
Reviewed By: chibi_vegeta On: September 17, 2002 18:47 CDT
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well fuuuuuuck...*folds arms..tail lashing*...damn rogue...*grins hugely*...fucking a...get your ass moving on this!...it went from being someone hesitant at the beginning yet it now plowing everything aside...cripes...the angst has to have xe pre-orgasmic...*snickers* |
Reviewed By: Nathaly On: September 17, 2002 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found you, I found you..*is hopping around*..
Oh!..*sits down*
Thats so sad! No baby? *looks disappointed* What effect will this have on the relation of Goku and Vegeta. Vegeta was so caringly. Hope he will not stop this. Goku is still his mate.
All bad comes together. There will not be a great party the next time, I guess! Poor Spice, life isn't easy for her either.
Gohan needs some help. But first make him realize. He should think a little bit.
Ah, and update soon!! |
Reviewed By: ShadowRose On: September 17, 2002 15:55 CDT
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WOOOOO!! I'm so happy it was here. I was reading on ff.net and I thought I the fic went away buuuuuut it's here WOOOOOOOT!! |
Reviewed By: Crafty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::sobs:: That's so unfair! Goku would've made a great father. Vegeta, too, in his own way. And it's unfair for purely selfish reasons...I wanted to see the baby and learn more about it! That's so sad. I got chills when Spice disowned Gohan. Please don't keep us waiting too long with the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Xero On: September 17, 2002 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! Poor Vegeta! Poor Kaky! I wanted to see the baby!
If this makes Vegeta try to leave again, I'm gonna hunt you down, dearie..... Time for him to learn to think about Kakarot first.
BTW, thanks for e-mailing me about the MM switch! |
Reviewed By: Goku Mum On: September 17, 2002 11:07 CDT
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Poor baby, will you give some explanation for the miscarriage, except of the blown? The whole situation seems to be quite messed up. I'm eager to read what you are making of this. |
Reviewed By: Star Spangle Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 20:44 CDT
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OMG! *sniffles* Poor Goku...and watch out Gohan...you'll be meeting Videl in heaven when Veggie gets his hands on you!
Another great chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Fate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you decided to post this here! Damn ff.net... Anyway, I loved the chappie. *reaches for her spork* I insist that you write more. After all you don't wanna leave us hanging for too long, right? |
Reviewed By: Casey Emerilza On: September 14, 2002 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is excellent. Your story has kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Hurry and update..I am going nutz! |
Reviewed By: Crafty On: September 13, 2002 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading all the chapters posted so far, and I love it! Please, please update soon! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 03:36 CDT
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Hrm, not fond of Gohan are you? He's giving the Saijan couple the most trouble and now it looks like he's about to end up as a smear on the wall! V. may be exhausted but that ain't gonna help Gohan much now! Oh dear.... *cringes waiting for first punch to land* |
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