Reviewed By:Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 19:33 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: The story is pretty good, please do continue. And if it hadn't bin for that one grueseome image you put in at the end of chapter 2 you'd have gotten a perfect 10. But adding good new chapters should fix that easily.