| "eXXXcapades: Life and Times of Hitomi Kanzaki" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: ash_lee On: April 03, 2008 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey you finally updated!! i'm so happy *does the happy dance* good chapter although i was a little shocked (ok a lot shocked)when Dryden showed up at Hitomi's dorm but for some reason i'm glad that it was just a dream. hope you'll update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 13:04 CST
Comment/Review:
In response to your notes, I'd say complete the entire thing and post it up. However there's nothing wrong with putting up a small teaser to have us wanting more. My 2 cents.
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Reviewed By: ash_lee On: December 11, 2007 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story ! it became a little too sad for me at the end.....(u made me cry) what is hitomi gonna do now where is she gonna go??? oh please rite more i really really REALLY wanna know what happens to her next!! please keep updating!!
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Reviewed By: canCan On: September 23, 2007 13:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue!!!!
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Reviewed By: gunnu On: September 22, 2007 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice! I especially liked the part where he tells her everything as in wat happen between him n yoko n everything about himself.
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Reviewed By: Borderline On: September 22, 2007 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
intense!!!! but i liked it reminded me of someone!! keep it up.
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Reviewed By: osuwari On: July 19, 2007 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it ... looking forward for more Hitomi's sexcapades ... hope's it'll be hotter and better than with Dilly.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first when I read your opening notes I was afraid this would fall into typical mindless lemon territory, but I was pleased, especially with the character development you did throughout the second part when you really explored the consequences of sex on a person's life and the yearning to have back ones innocence once its lost. So yeah, I applaud your efforts so far, I'll be keeping an eye out for future updates.
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Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 14:12 CDT
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i wish there was more to this it's that good
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Reviewed By: jossi_31 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 13:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think i would hate my mom if i was her
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