Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think the basic idea of this fic is pretty fair, and the basic dialog and such is written a lot better then most lemon fics. If I had to point out one HUGE issue with this fic it would be the drug use. Blattant drug use left and right, like it solves all of lifes problems. I could see Kaji using weed or something to losen Shinji up that first night, but no he goes above and beyond the call of duty and turns Shinji into a chain smocking addict by shoving more weed and drugs down this throat. Then the very next day shinji goes to school to pimp out the weed to his friends, as a solution to all their problems. While in a way, rampant drug use makes some sense in such a gloom and doom world setting, most of your drug use just doesn't add up. How can shinji be on call for angel attacks if he's stonned or drunk out of his mind? Most of Eva piloting is mental, yet they just let him act stoned 24/7. Not to mention Shini's what a 2-3 times a day man already, whats going happen when he's bodies restance builds up. He's 14 and been using for like 2 days and he's already having cravings and chain smoking. Mindless sex I've learned to accept in hentai type fics, but preaching drug use I put in the same catagory as reading about rape.
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