| "Love's Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady Goldmooon On: March 23, 2002 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... thats all I have to say... a beautiful story... Wow... |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan On: September 05, 2001 19:56 CDT
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OMG!!!! Ur here too!!! This is sooo great!!! I find the girl i beta read for and then one of my favorite authors!!!! Hurry up with the next chapter ok? As usual i still love this fic and ur writing rules! |
Reviewed By: Emperor's sister On: September 12, 2001 19:28 CDT
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Hola! Wow! Fabuu ficcy! please write more soon! i'm eagerly anticipating what happens next. |
Reviewed By: LindaN On: September 24, 2001 00:54 CDT
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Dianna - This is truly a beautiful story and very eloquently written. Thank you for sharing it with us and I look forward to reading more from you. I apologize that it has taken me so long to read and review. |
Reviewed By: Umi On: October 07, 2001 13:49 CDT
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Wow. I always ask for fics that take the characters into a new surrounding when I review and you certainly did that. I really like your idea and your style fits well with the story.
E-mail me if you want to talk at thecakebakingwatergoddess@hotmail.com. |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan On: October 08, 2001 15:53 CDT
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I'm so glad you finally got the next chapter up! As usual I love it! Your work is so wonderfully written! I can't wait to see what you do with this whole Akio kidnaps Utena thing...^_^ |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 13, 2001 13:05 CDT
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Hey, I'd just like to say that your story is really imaginative and to keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: someone On: October 13, 2001 14:48 CDT
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It's amazing how all your stories suddenly have such great ratings...hm. I sense someone is rating her own stuff...oh well. If you want to gain MediaMiner success that way you just look stupid. It's a pity you have to do that, sort of takes away from your work which is actually pretty good. Real pity. |
Reviewed By: Corvus On: October 14, 2001 04:19 CDT
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"someone", are you just an idiot or do you actively take classes in stupidity? Your name wouldn't happen to be "Roxanna Ohtori", would it?... Anyway. If you're taking aim at someone for voting for their own stories, perhaps you should go flame all the Gundam and DBZ authors who like to give their own fics "10"s. This story is receiving critical acclaim from people with a lot more of a clue than you, so the only thing suspect here is why the story doesn't have a higher rating. Seems to me like you're a prime candidate to be pulling it down. And yes, you can go find my fics and screw with their ratings too, now. Oooh, what fun! |
Reviewed By: LindaN On: October 14, 2001 09:42 CDT
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I think of all the stories on MediaMiner, this one is the most eloquently written and it was me yesterday who kept trying to vote this story back into it's place of honor here on MediaMiner. And I won't stop until it sits proudly again with the rating it deserves. Each time yesterday when I would vote on this beautiful story yesterday from my heart, the cruel voter would strike almost instantly and once again vote 1's trashing it. And those 1's take a long time to repair. and "someone" I am not surprised that you simply do not have the courage to speak openly about your practices. Just like with my story, I will be be watching this too. So be warned. cruel voter, I won't allow my opinions to be messed with. Linda |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 19, 2001 19:26 CDT
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So far this has to be teh BEST chapter. It has so much action and the way you wrote it made it even better! |
Reviewed By: The Anime Schoolgirl On: October 20, 2001 21:17 CDT
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Interesting plot, though the writing is far too over-descriptive and flamboyant. It sounds like it crawled out from between the pages or Revelations. If you ever wanted to improve you could focus less on adjectives and more on verbs. Also, it's far too long. People get tired of fics fast, unless they are able to hold peoples attention. Yours doesn't. Also, it lets the characters down from the series. The reason everyone loved the series was because the characters were so human and easy to relate to. Your story seems to lift them above the audience, like angels or something, in the language and descriptions, leaving no point of reference. This is probably why it becomes to tedious. Overall an average fic, dressed up in pretty words and descriptions. |
