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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was pretty cool can you keep going and make chapters
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Reviewed By: RuneWarriorGal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is really sweet and a bit funny =)
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story, keep up the great work in the Inuyasha fanficdom!
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Title: wow....
Reviewed By: GenericInuYashaName5 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im at a loss for words....... i can practiccally hear them talking... you are an amazing writer and one of the few who can inject subtle undercurrents of feelings into the text that make it so much better than any other author..... and at the end..... kagome sounded almost innocent...
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Reviewed By: inuyashaxkagomeforever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dang kagome and kagome! he he! aw! kagome u need to stop jumping to things! owell! gr8 work! ^-^
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Reviewed By: rinsama---15 On: August 14, 2007 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was amazing!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 18:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was an awesome story! I love it! It was a really good idea on your beta's part, and you wrote it SO well. Great job!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ABSULUTLY LOVED IT!!! it was great!! YOU'R AN AWESOME WRITER!! YOU'R THE BEST!!!
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 19:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love u nd i dnt kno u lol.... ur writing is soooooooo amazing... nd this story is no exception ^_^... very very cute ^_^... i likie tha end ... haha
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 17:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked it its awsome hopfully you can make a series of this story beacuse its a good thought i sware you will have alot of fans!!!!!
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Title: Woooooooot!
Reviewed By: Kiyo-chan On: July 02, 2007 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow....that one wasnice :Places a hand to her heart.: I loved that. It was...so nice. I love how you write InuYasha as inexperienced. I believe it makes it so much sweeter, it also makes me smile wickedly. LOL To teach a Hanyou. I think the virgin InuYasha deal is cute, and it makes the lemons a lot more heart felt. It's not just sex, it's making love. ^^ I loved it, I read it twice. Really awesome. Oh, and, will you do a Short for the beginning? Like to explain what happened to Sango, and the whole "Uh oh." thing? LOL Anyway. It was another beautiful One-Shot. The lemon was sweet, I loved it. :HUGS: Don't stop writing! (Forgive me if the italics thing didn't work. Never tried it before.)
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: July 02, 2007 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One wonders what your dreams are like. You have a great sense of how to write a lemon. I liked it. I just wish my lemons were as good.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 22:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Do I seriously have to tell you how much you rock right now. lol Your an awesome writer.. and iswear any thing you write ..lol especially lemons come out frickin awesome! =] `r4k
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Title: so cool
Reviewed By: YU-YU-TONI [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cool :}
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome!! your an awesome writer, keep it up ^_~
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