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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Saw your pic of Chaz. Pretty hot. Besides I think Kie deserves someone of his own. Kinda hoping that you'll make them a pairing. With the tour coming up,and everyones issues made clear things should really get interesting. Looking forward to what happens next. Later!
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great, a new chapter. And I love that you've created an opportunity for Aidein and Jett. And again Kei to the rescue.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Good chapter. Looking forward to the next.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 06:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Finally, an opening for Aiden/Jett! Good chapter by the way. Can't wait for the next. Looking forward to what happens next. Later.
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Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 17:18 CST
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DUNDUNDUN. Kei's talk with Jett was amusing... and interesting... Ty needs to die... painfully. ^-^. He pisses me off more and more with each chapter...
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Good chapter! But I don't think I like Ty right now. Though, he's a well written homophobe(spelling?) I think he a necessary evil to your story. I'm looking forward to seeing how well you use him. update soon.
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Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: Iceberg60 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, bu tell me Aiden ends up with Jett! Please? Pretty please? I'm sure Jett will come to his senses and somehow realize he loves Aiden, and Aiden needs to snap out of his so called, "love" with Nikki. I dont like Nikki so much, he seems to be pitying Skye, and running blindsided into a relationship with Aiden. Seriously, with the flirting, and he does have a boyfriend afterall. Not to mention, like Aiden, i have no idea what he's thinking. Aiden and Jett belong together, but I want to see it happen sometime soon too! Maybe Jett will explore his own preferences, and Aiden gets jealous when he starts hainging around with somebody? Oooh, jealousy is the fuel for all realized love! Anyways, it wuld be cool if you could bring the oher members of the band into focus more. Let us know more about them, like Ty, and Jade, and any others i'm forgetting. Bringing them in would add some texture to the story too! And maybe that can start the whole Jealousy with Jett thing going on. Wow, i'm such a rambler, but i'm really anxious to see how this turns out, and how far it goes because the pacing can be a little hinged relationship wise. Anyways, I love it! and i hope to see Jett/Aiden soon! Update quickly!
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Title: Here's the thing
Reviewed By: Passing reader On: December 05, 2007 20:16 CST
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While your story wasn't bad, I couldn't help but dislike some of the characters, namely Aidan and Nikki. They were so contradictory in what they said and how they acted that they came off as hypocrites. One minute Aidan is so self-absorbed in his own pain, and the next he's considering falling in love with Jett after only having met him for a couple of hours. Next he's saying Nikki has wounded him too much to really trust him again, then somehow he ends up sleeping with him despite telling Skye that he was crazy for even suggesting what he did, and to top it all off with an excuse that didn't seem convincing. Finally he comes to realize that he still loves Nikki despite everything, and the next minute he's flirting with Jett. The only thing I get from Nikki is that he somehow regrets choosing Skye over Aidan and while he says he loves him it seems more like pity. Now he conveniently uses Skye's desire to see him happy to chase after Aidan, despite telling him at firs that he just wanted to be friends once again, if nothing else. And finally there's Kei, whom I did like. But it was annoying to see how Aidan constantly treated him with contempt, but somehow found it ok to call him to tell him that he had slept with Nikki even if he had regrets the morning after.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 08:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So far SoOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good. Can't wait for update. Well done.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 06:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Later
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Good chapter. Good that Aidan, has finally came home. But I'd like to think, that things would eventually lead Aidan to Jett, rather than back to Nikki or to Kie. Alas, It's your story and I guess I'll have to wait until you reveal what happens. Hope that it will be soon. I do so hate waiting.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Good chapter. The band is ready to go, with it's first rehearsal. Also, it's really hard getting yourself reviews,on this site,without you purposefully locking out anomomouse reviewers. Check your settings, to see if this option has set up "willing" not accidently.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 17:47 CDT
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I really liked your chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 15:09 CDT
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Forget the revisions,and on with story, already.
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