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| "Bloodwraith" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: Iceberg60 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, bu tell me Aiden ends up with Jett! Please? Pretty please? I'm sure Jett will come to his senses and somehow realize he loves Aiden, and Aiden needs to snap out of his so called, "love" with Nikki. I dont like Nikki so much, he seems to be pitying Skye, and running blindsided into a relationship with Aiden. Seriously, with the flirting, and he does have a boyfriend afterall. Not to mention, like Aiden, i have no idea what he's thinking. Aiden and Jett belong together, but I want to see it happen sometime soon too! Maybe Jett will explore his own preferences, and Aiden gets jealous when he starts hainging around with somebody? Oooh, jealousy is the fuel for all realized love! Anyways, it wuld be cool if you could bring the oher members of the band into focus more. Let us know more about them, like Ty, and Jade, and any others i'm forgetting. Bringing them in would add some texture to the story too! And maybe that can start the whole Jealousy with Jett thing going on. Wow, i'm such a rambler, but i'm really anxious to see how this turns out, and how far it goes because the pacing can be a little hinged relationship wise. Anyways, I love it! and i hope to see Jett/Aiden soon! Update quickly!
| Title: Here's the thing
Reviewed By: Passing reader On: December 05, 2007 20:16 CST
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While your story wasn't bad, I couldn't help but dislike some of the characters, namely Aidan and Nikki. They were so contradictory in what they said and how they acted that they came off as hypocrites. One minute Aidan is so self-absorbed in his own pain, and the next he's considering falling in love with Jett after only having met him for a couple of hours. Next he's saying Nikki has wounded him too much to really trust him again, then somehow he ends up sleeping with him despite telling Skye that he was crazy for even suggesting what he did, and to top it all off with an excuse that didn't seem convincing. Finally he comes to realize that he still loves Nikki despite everything, and the next minute he's flirting with Jett. The only thing I get from Nikki is that he somehow regrets choosing Skye over Aidan and while he says he loves him it seems more like pity. Now he conveniently uses Skye's desire to see him happy to chase after Aidan, despite telling him at firs that he just wanted to be friends once again, if nothing else. And finally there's Kei, whom I did like. But it was annoying to see how Aidan constantly treated him with contempt, but somehow found it ok to call him to tell him that he had slept with Nikki even if he had regrets the morning after.
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 08:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So far SoOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good. Can't wait for update. Well done.
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 06:17 CST
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Good chapter. Later
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Good chapter. Good that Aidan, has finally came home. But I'd like to think, that things would eventually lead Aidan to Jett, rather than back to Nikki or to Kie. Alas, It's your story and I guess I'll have to wait until you reveal what happens. Hope that it will be soon. I do so hate waiting.
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Good chapter. The band is ready to go, with it's first rehearsal. Also, it's really hard getting yourself reviews,on this site,without you purposefully locking out anomomouse reviewers. Check your settings, to see if this option has set up "willing" not accidently.
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 17:47 CDT
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I really liked your chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 15:09 CDT
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Forget the revisions,and on with story, already.
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the rest.
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Now that's more like it. Neat introduction chapter of Ty. Now I'm really looking forward to see the band together and how they interact with each other. So far so good. Later.
| Title: < 333
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm such a slack-ass... I haven't reviewed for the past... what? 10 chapters? ANYWAY, to make up for that, I guess I'll have to say everything. First of all I love the way your characters go through so many internal conflicts... and how they all get along with each other is almost what I'd describe as /adorable/, but I think 'interesting' would be a more accurate word. Kei is just so cool, he's so perverted and wanting but he's respectful too. Nikki I'm not sure about, he's a bit of a dick ditching Skye and trying to get into Aidan's pants... almost as if he doesn't want Skye anymore 'cause he's sick. xD But I really like him as a character, not so much as a person. Jade's an interesting character, and Jett is so mysterious. I can honestly say I have no idea what's going to happen, which is an awkward feeling for me because I usually at least have some idea of what I think is going to happen. But I love the unpredictable plot you have going here, and I've loved everything else of yours that I've read, so I expect awesome things! Take your time in updating and keep up the great work, I love where this is going and definitely admire your talent. Once again, awesome work and I'll try not to slack on the reviews anymore, you sure deserve 'em. It's like every time I read a chapter here I just want to skip off and write something... I never even thought to review >.>. Bad me. Anyway... I'll stop now... LOVE IT!
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I was so looking forward to a new chapter. Not a revision. You could of a least done both. S'kay as long as that chapter shows up soon. Just a bit disappointed. Later
| Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW! I like this story. Please do continue
| Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 19:27 CDT
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Hey, this is pretty good! I like how different each of your characters are. They've all got a story to tell and work well together. The story do far is an interesting one. I can't ait to see what happens now that everyone's togethr again. Ps. I especialy like Jett, He sounds really cool! well, keep up the great work, looking forwrd to an update!
| Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Mmmm, I like Aidan, can't wait to see what happens 8D. Great writing style too, nice vocabulary, chapter three was a little hard to follow due to the format, I assume that was a mistake. Love it though!
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