| "Secrets Beneath the Surface" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 22:54 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG...this is so good...please update as soon as possible...i cant wait to find out what happens...
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do hope since Sesshomaru seems to feel Kagome to some extent that he hurries up and just maybe helps her save the baby before it is too late. Very good chapter.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your story i hope kagome is ok i think it would be awesome if you turned it into a M Story and had lemons but my opinion i love your work doing an awesome job like always well thats it for now i guess ttyl4n please update soon your fan *hugs you*
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you have this story going, I look forward to future chapters I hope that rin lets it slip about the little "secret" and he dumps the cow for the right girl
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story and I hope Sesshomaru comes to his senses before it is too late. Please update soon as I want to see how he reacts when he finds out Kagome is gone.
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Title: Secrets Beneath the Surface
Reviewed By: tsukikomaru On: November 27, 2007 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The status of this story said "Completed". Please tell me that this not so...not the way it has ended. There has got to be more. Will you be adding more to this story or no? I like this story and would like to see where you take this. Please update or something...don't leave us hanging *sniffles* What Kagura is doing is just down right evil. She is terrible bitch in this piece *grrr* Nicely done...*hugs and smiles*
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Reviewed By: ladyfluffy of the western lands On: July 31, 2007 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate that song ''missing'' it is terrible girl
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Reviewed By: ladyfluffy of the western lands On: July 31, 2007 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow kagome is in trobel how dare she take seeshomeru awayfrom me
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Reviewed By: ladyfluffy of the western lands On: July 31, 2007 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooow was that sesshomeru's child i so cant wait to read the next chapter
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Title: secrets beneath the surface
Reviewed By: ladyfluffy of the western lands On: July 31, 2007 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE THAT SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it is my favrite song i have the CD.Lips Of An ANGEL is my favrite song that hinder ever wrote i allsow like the story PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wright me at luceronegro@univision.com i cant what till you wright another story OH and my name is lucero the ''c'' in my name sounds like a ''s'' and u can call me lucia if you want to i have short brown hair and big brown eyes. so now you sorta now what i look like if you can whright me some thim that would be nice.[lol]
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Reviewed By: Katana Kiba On: July 05, 2007 19:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Definitely not an "amazing" on my scale, certianly an above average fic. might want to put a little more action into it (preferably something with a sword) still, this one is better than the copycat fics ive read the first page of in the last 30 minutes. really , its better for them to try writing something origional & failing miserably than to copy someone else's work & have no one read it. but that's just me. upload more soon! PLZ!
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