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Reviewed By: PopcornImp On: July 04, 2008 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP! It's been FAR too long, since I've read a story of this caliber. I haven't been this engrossed, in a story, since the 5th Harry Potter book. Never could I have pitured uke Seto, but you made it compleatly beliveable. Wow... 100 out of 5 stars, for you! Ps...Please update, soon!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 19:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohh please please tell me your not finished with this..
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Reviewed By: margyy On: January 21, 2008 06:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great fic so far! Poor Seto, he has had to put up with so much.. Though I didn't really understand when you wrote that the real Saki died 2 years ago and this one was a look alike? PLEASE update soon!!
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: Shorty_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story..and thats a lot comming from me cuz i only review to the great stuff. i read most puppy/seto shippings and seto is alwasy the strong one..this is a totally new take..and i love how u can read from seto's point of view..keep up the good work...please let kat kick the crap out of that bastard and let him get some seto ass in the end(tell seto to be a man and do jou or let him do him for crying out loud!!)...update soon!!!!!!!!
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Title: Fave
Reviewed By: Shad-ai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 05:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just finished reading what you've done so far, and I must say, this impresses me to no end. In fact, I sincerely hope that Jou completely ANNIHILATES Saki. Your story is an inspiration to the entire Seto/Jou pairing. May you have lots of luck for now and the future.
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Title: I'll die soon
Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't deal with this anymore! Jou's stupidity! it's just annoying! Your fan fic is absolutely fantastic and amazing! but Jou is such an idiot...OMG can yo switch to a more intellegent POV? please? Kaiba maybe? Jou's thinking is just too elementary. OMG. I'm gonna go nuts, if he keeps acting like a complete moron! Isn't there an intellegent thought somewhere? I am NOT saying tha author isn't intelligent, because the fan fiction is absolutely great!
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Reviewed By: DeathIsAMidnightRunner On: October 22, 2007 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is just... wow. I can not find words to describe it properly. I do not give praise easily, but I really love this. There has only been one other time I was this engrossed in a story. I can really feel the emotions and even your OCs are well put together. (I want to kill Saki with my bare hands but... yeah.) I hope someday that my stories can reach this level. I am eagerly awaiting your update! The suspense is killing me as well!
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Reviewed By: Anon. On: September 09, 2007 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just read the whole story. Wow, I love your portrayal of the characters. They have so much going on in their lives but still find moments to have fun in. I look forward to future chapters. And yes, the suspense kills me also.
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Title: Change
Reviewed By: dresslikeinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 04:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know, I was never really one for the Jou/Seto pairing but this was very good and very nicely written. At this point, I guess I'll add another pairing to my list of favorites. ^-^
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Reviewed By: XxXToraXxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, this was so great. I was literally engulfed in this story. Its amazing, and I really hope for you to continue writing it. I love how it varies and how Seto is so in character but at the same time TOTALLY out of character. Its awesome how youve done that. I love the story, please continue. =]
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Reviewed By: Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is just wow. The writing is awesome. The way you weave emotions together is superb. I go from laughing really hard one second to blushing or sighing the next. I have never read a uke Seto story but after this I can totally see him in the role. I kinda like how you've given them both strengths and weaknesses. And your OC characters don't over shadow the story line even though they are a major part of it. Every Mary Sue writer should read this to see how you really are supposed to write your own characters in. This is an awesome story, please continue it. *clicks to favorites*
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Reviewed By: Bondage_Bunny_Misa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 16:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE QUICKLY!!! I SOOO want to read more!! AHH! THE SUSPENSE! IT KILLZ!!!*sobs uncontroallby*
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 12:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is really good, as well as incredibly tragic. Thank you for sharing it with us (and I'd love an update soon). Please continue to write, and not have 6 month hiatuses. Those tend to suck. Later
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Reviewed By: cinque [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 01:52 CDT
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I´m at chapter 3 now. I think the story progesses a bit fast, but non the less I like the concept very much.
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Reviewed By: Fynrile [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 03:01 CDT
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hurry and make the rest I'm cring buckets here!! I hope my bro (Katsuya) kicks that bitch Saki's ass!!! do you do challenges? If so can you write one staring Mokuba & Noah? J/S R/B Y/Atemu and no Anzu!!!
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