| "Bathroom Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: the butler [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 12:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
and we have a winner! for a while i thought yohji might be drugs (as in are you drugs?!) but the explanation made better sense. the oven didn't know what hit it- funny funny line. great work! the kitchen is vital! haha. i'm kinda wondering how Aya got around to getting a bath in the kitchen though, nothing malicious or anything. and the bird flipping balinese is genius. i wish i can write funny stories with less words like you do.
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Reviewed By: Nariel (narielfake at aim dot com) On: July 29, 2007 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
9 coz too short *smirk* But congrats on writing a non-yaoi fic. What? They're as rare as huge blue diamonds in this fandom. Now I'm a die-hard yaoi fangirl, but I bow to daring originality ^_^ Oh, the picture of them crammed into the bathroom .... *proceeds to snicker*
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 18:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
fabulous, absolutely fabulous!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lots of fun, well done!
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